Soon Moon

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For Eve Roper's 'Nursery Rhymes only' Poetry Contest.

Claire Catt was having tea one afternoon Reading a book, as blue birds sang a tune. The cat sat, loving fragrant breezes of June; Until she saw red sun, chasing pale moon! Claire jumped up yelling, 'Nothing is right! For how can gold sun, run into black night?' But, orange sun returned, with dawn light. Then Claire said smiling, now all is right!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2024 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Soon Moon" write. Now for a cup of tea & a good book... Have a blessed day/week.....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/18/2024 9:28:00 PM

Yes, Claire Catt sure appears to be enjoying the afternoon! Thanks so much for your warm words of congratulations. Hope your week is also blessed.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2024 10:26:00 AM

Delightful to see your nursery rhyme on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/18/2024 9:24:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind thoughts, Sara. My very best to you.

Karen Jones

Date: 8/15/2024 5:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/15/2024 7:50:00 PM

Deepest thanks, Karen. :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/4/2024 4:24:00 PM

This is sweet. I love the cat personality. I have room for her here.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/4/2024 8:17:00 PM

Thank you for your treasured thoughts. Though we're too attached to part, it's heartwarming to know you'd like to adopt my Claire.

Ink Empress

Date: 8/4/2024 7:25:00 AM

Awwn this is so cute, and so well written for the picture prompt with excellent rhymes dear evelyn. Loved the ending and also how youv written “ The cat sat, loving fragrant breezes of June; Until she saw red sun, chasing pale moon!” How descriptive! Beautiful! As always you did an artistic write with poetic storytelling: pleasure reading this. Best wishes for the contest

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/4/2024 8:12:00 PM

Your warm insights and kind expressions are such delight to read, dear friend. Thank you so much for your precious comments. Many blessings.