Soon Enough

for him
it was all about
the chase
the art
the seduction
the romance
the game
the conquest
the compulsion

soon enough
she’d have him
eating out of her hand
like a puppy



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcferran Avatar
June 19, 2019 at 7:46 PM
I had an uncle like this... and it's really sad. They chase women like it's some kind of 'high' that's always just out of reach.... and as you say, eventually end up all alone. This is brilliantly penned. Great work! ;)
Gauthier Avatar
June 19, 2019 at 9:16 PM
Thanks, Rhona, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2019 at 5:57 PM
I guess he's what they call, in the relationship game, 'old-school.' (Not a good thing at all). :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
June 18, 2019 at 7:27 PM
In the end - he ends up alone... as you say "not a good thing at all". Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 18, 2019 at 3:38 PM
That last line made me cringe, my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
June 18, 2019 at 7:27 PM
Sad, some people just don't get it.
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