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Soon

Soon~very end~the last day
Vacation comes to close
There are sighing pines and tear drops
While packing some of clothes

Life is filled with many options
Even without great riches
How we choose to use each minute
Determines most hitches

One word spoken lashing outward
Can change the form of day
From it flowing like a slow tide
To a tsunami astray  

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/11/2013 6:08:00 PM
so much wisdom woven together in beauty Shadow x
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Date: 6/10/2013 7:55:00 PM
You are right a kind word or smile can make a day and a mean one can echo for years.
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Date: 6/10/2013 7:16:00 PM
Excellent rhythm in this comely write Sara.
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Date: 6/10/2013 3:49:00 PM
This is an incredible write my friend, quite the phenomenal poem Sara! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a masterfully written poem here, such a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/10/2013 2:02:00 PM
What a build-up. Fantastic word flow here.
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