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Sonorous Insult

(after Robert Desnos) I spit in the eye of the father of the bride of the blacksmith who made the axe with which the lumberjacks cut down the big old oak with a hundred lusty strokes and which they split in half and from which the bed was carved (with a swag of fruit and leaves) in which the fellow was conceived who became the great-grandfather of the guy with the massage parlor where, provocatively clad, your mother met your dad.

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Date: 3/21/2017 5:06:00 AM
Maudit, right? OOoooohhh, I love this translation of that small poem! And you even made it into couplets :) And although, for the sake of rhyme, you had to deviate, it's still SO close to the meaning of the original. Glorious. Those lusty strokes are brilliant :) (And no, I didn't know the poem, I looked it up)
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/21/2017 9:40:00 AM
The incredible thing is, you FOUND it!

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