Sonnet Poem: Remembering a Father

A pair of shoes that walked many tests
Skipping and hurdling the hardest
Shockproof to the condition around
Halt to prepare for what tomorrow's abound

A distinctive scent of sweat for a living
Upbringing of children is not failing
Many sails and flights brought them away
A love message to sustain each longing day

Hiding tears to withstand the test of time
Strong grip of every chance is sublime
Man of few words but a cherished action
Unload your worries, now at peace with God without distraction

In my most solitary moments
I will live to the image you represent


15 June 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sietesantos Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 3:40 PM
A beautiful tribute to your father, Noel - no wonder it is on the winners' list! Congratulations!
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June 11, 2014 at 10:30 PM
Noel, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:01 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, noel
Johnson Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 7:51 PM
a sincere dedication to your father. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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June 15, 2013 at 3:09 AM
A wonderful poem Noel and i love the last two lines so much.A happy father's day to you-Charma
Chircop Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 3:08 AM
A wonderful poem Noel and i love the last two lines so much.A happy father's day to you-Charma
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