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The sound of rain is better than your voice As is the crashing ocean and the sea Your sound is smoother than a new Rolls Royce Your voice is a beautiful thing to me Sadly your voice cannot beat fallout boy Your voice may set my ears a fiery blaze I may be dead but it is not a ploy But would die to listen to you for days Your voice is not everyone’s want or need However its faults mean everything Your voice has grown in my heart like a weed The growth in my heart accelerating You and your faulty crooked broken voice Makes my heart ooze with feelings of rejoice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/29/2014 11:13:00 PM
MARY, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/25/2014 6:58:00 AM
I love the concept of this poem! I think of loved ones whose voices I will always cherish, with every nuance. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 11/23/2014 5:14:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mary - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/21/2014 8:12:00 PM
Hi Mary,, this is a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/21/2014 10:37:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on an avatar or name to go to anothers poems. Leave a comment and that person will have a permanent link back to your works... Keep writing.
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Date: 11/20/2014 5:27:00 PM
love the feelins displayed here - we love them despite their faults:-) hugs jan xxx
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