Sonnet 40 'so Very Innocent, Genteel, Serene'

So very innocent, genteel, serene
A preschool teacher with a fiery heart…
And free of petty words or gestures mean,
A racehorse, all impatient for the start.
She won hearts yet unwon, with brilliant smile
And moved the most rough-hewn to gentleness.
Fought fiercely for the Child, and all the while
Held sacred every pain I did confess.
She let her broken bits be meld together,
Attained a certain Oneness, oft in prayer.
Forgave all heaviness, as ‘twere a feather,
And of hearts, kindly counted mine as rare.
Still, now, the twin fires of our loving sing,
And make the quiet spheres of cosmos ring.

4/4/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Hello Andrew Fairchild, When I read this poem, I thought she is a brave school teacher. Have a nice day my friend.
Fairchild Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Thank you so much! Yes she was.
Capitano Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 6:08 AM
Really beautiful, Andrew, Will would be proud. Wasn't sure where you were going but the ending pulled it all together. Great job.
Fairchild Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 8:34 AM
Thanks very much! :-) Half of the time, I don't know where I am going, until the end. I try to plan, but sometimes, it just comes out how it comes out.
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