Sonnet 32 'sometimes, I Wake Up From Sweet Death's Dull Sleep'

Sometimes, I wake up from Sweet Death’s dull sleep,
And find, I’ve not been living as I could,
My friends tell me they tire of seeing me weep…
I feel like I’m a boy, not flesh, but wood…
My nose is growing long, they seem to think,
Although I speak, and mean just what I say,
Some tell me that my promises all stink,
Like broccoli that’s been left out all day.
Well, I’M NOT LIKE THAT!  And I don’t agree!
“What seems a lie’s a Promise,” bright Ray* said,
“a need, ramshackle, waiting to be born…”
I think he’s right, and even though he’s dead
I’ll take his words, go charging up the stairs,
And make amends, and show, I’m one who Cares!

*’What seems a lie, is a promise, a ramshackle need, waiting to be born…” – Ray Bradbury
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lindley Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 2:13 PM
I love the great sonnet that you wove from that Bradbury quote! Very creative, deep and emotionally expressive... A fav, a true gem too..
Krutsinger Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 9:47 PM
Ray Bradbury would be so proud of you, Andrew, as I am. Great job!
Fairchild Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 2:06 AM
Thank you, Caren, I really appreciate that! :-)
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