Sonnet 19 'How Strange It's Hard For Me To Wash Your Clothes'

“How Strange… it’s Hard for me to wash your clothes:
They will be put away for the last time…
They’ve stayed ten months in small piles, and, who knows?
They won’t be done, before I write this rhyme…”
I can’t give up her coat – she will be cold…
I can’t give up her jeans – what will she wear?
I can’t give her good care, and I can’t hold
Her…  “Would you stay a little while?  Your hair…
I miss the scent, when I would press my face
Against your sleeping shoulder, lie in bliss…
And now, one lock of hair, now empty space
On your side of the bed.  I think I miss
You…  O!  The Travesty!  Love – come to this!
But no, Love Lives!  It’s the small things, like your kiss…”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 2/16/2019 5:42:00 AM
This touched me deeply! You are a master of Sonnet. It is one of my favorite genres...that and personifications. I have written several sonnets posted on this forum. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent. Elaine
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/16/2019 7:10:00 AM
I am so grateful that it reached you. That was a very painful day, but it was also a beautiful experience, touching her things. It was like the feeling of her was still in the clothes. Thank you for your generosity. I will come and check out your work, I've read a little, and I LOVE it!
Date: 1/19/2019 10:11:00 AM
I can’t get this one out of my head. It is powerful—raw and real yet tenderly written... blessings dear poet.
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Date: 1/19/2019 2:16:00 PM
Aw. I am glad you felt it deeply. It is very close to my heart -- I was doing her laundry for the last time, and... well, you know...
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