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Sonnet 14, Part 1 of 3

1. Ripples in warm sunbeams dwell.
From a sandy cocoon I wake and stir.
A floater in the blue does knell,
A dot, a stain, a blackened blur.
Am I the only one who sees?
No, the beach is afoot with myriad peeps.
The knell is deep -- a woofer wheeze.
A transient blot that fades and creeps,
Until it is vanished and we all take a seat.
I gather my belongings, pining for home.
An odd Summer chill swirls the waning heat.
A disquiet, discomfort invades my bones.
Driving like ants, mindless, small.
A soul in flux begins to stall.

2. A soul in flux begins to stall.
On the cool of an evening breeze,
We listen for the cicadas' call,
Lighted by the firefly trees.
"They're disappearing," so she speaks.
"The birds, the fish and the honeybee."
My disquiet returns with an odorous reek.
I shamble in for beer and tea.
We retire to the living room
To watch a passive, virtual play.
On a couch that sinks into the gloom,
A strange perception has its way:
An eerie change that has befell.
I meditate on a living well.

3. I meditate on a living well
Through oceans of calm and chaos,
To deep depths where Dagon fell.
My teeth bleed of paste and floss.
The news is grim, the weather bright.
Two automatons breakfast in business style --
My eggs and bacon, her vegan delight.
Commuting to work from our secret isle.
Yes, a change -- imperceptible, *****.
A singular irritation of the masses.
An impossible shift in the magnetosphere.
The populace don their blocking glasses.
Stubborn separation and a promise to call.
I pray the night may never fall.

4. I pray the night may never fall.
In an outdoor cafe, absent of her,
A fish-eyed woman loosens her shawl
To an odd-smelling wisp of ocean liqueur.
The coffee cools in Creamsicle light.
Up in the sky I spot crosses.
Still no sign of my better sprite.
Some things land in saucers.
The city appears dimensionally off.
An amazing woman crosses the street.
"What happened, my love?" I cough.
"I can't ... remember," in deadpan greet.
I hold her close, without reply.
A flicker blurs beyond my eye.

5. A flicker blurs beyond my eye.
Cafe 14 shrinks in the rearview beams
Of the cab where I breathe a sigh.
A curious fly flits hither and preens.
She has not uttered a sound since 14.
There are people in the street disrobing.
The scenery swells, offensive, obscene.
A mist on the Hudson rises, disturbing.
I see ... things on the Bridge,
Across bumpy roads in disrepair.
Odors pervade like a forsaken fridge.
The Isle of Coney is drawing near.
Into the darkness we three....
Softly she sits upon my knee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Hi Tom, an excellent piece here, I did find the flow a bit difficult but did get into the stride, I read it before I listened to it and as they say, a poem should be heard from the poet's own lips. xx
Arnone Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Thank you for taking the time, Mandy. ;-)
Inman Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Tom, I must confess, with your initial couple of sonnets I was fascinated but confused. Then the veil began to open and the beauty of your write began to shine through. It is a very unique Sci-Fi ish love story. Too bad you missed the contest.
Arnone Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 1:01 PM
I'm happy you enjoyed the sonnets. They were fun and challenging to write (and record) -- and, as I said, your crown win was amazing.... :-)
A   Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 10:00 PM
WOW, Tom, I like how you did the audio, imagery, and sound. I meant I heard the water, birds and etc---so much good disturbance. Tom, I felt your words come to the surface. AMAZING.... Are you going to add audio to Sonnet part 2 of 3 and 3 of 3??? LINDA
Arnone Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 10:30 PM
Duh! Of course. Working on it. Hardest part is the actual voice recording (many takes and never get it right). The effects mixing, however, is fun and relatively easy....
Bordner Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 9:34 PM
"Up in the sky I spot crosses, still no sign of my better sprite..." good surreal imagery, this evokes the supernatural neatly, good use of the word sprite! "Odd smelling wisp of ocean liqueur..." that's marvelous poetryTom. I like the emphasis you place on scents...J.A.B.
Arnone Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Thanks for the critique, Justin.
Arnone Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 9:22 PM
Yes, I capitalize the seasons -- so, kill me!
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