Songs of Power - Winds of Change

Oh, how we’ve yearned to feel the sun’s warmth on our skin. For more than twenty, mournful years, the light has been a sin. Winter’s stony grip has kept us frozen in its exploitive storm. Breaking loose, we revolt against the prison guards’ cruel wall. Feel the winds of change, seeds of hope scatter far and near. (Oh, how we’ve yearned to feel the sun’s warmth on our skin.) Our eyes open to touch freedom with tears of solidarity as we cling to hands and hearts over our own crumbling fear. Families, neighbors reunite, and our nation celebrates. There’s magic in the air as we destroy our captor’s gates. Oh, how we’ve yearned to feel the sun’s warmth on our skin - in the light of dawn's new star, dreams reach beyond Berlin. Feel the winds of hope blow strong and steady at our backs empowering souls to reach for its triumphant music. Liberated voices lift from shadows as one world wakes to change. Oh, how we’ve yearned to feel the sun’s warmth on our skin!
written 11/18/15 for Songs of Power Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/21/2015 11:05:00 PM
Nice win
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Date: 11/21/2015 7:11:00 PM
Congratulations Rhonda
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Date: 11/21/2015 10:39:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win dear.. :) God bless
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Date: 11/21/2015 10:18:00 AM
Beautiful poem and great win my friend. Congrats on your win!! A7
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:08:00 AM
love the repeated form you have used Rhonda congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/18/2015 7:39:00 PM
Aha, I believe this is called Quatern verse, isn't it? When that one line keeps moving downward stanza to stanza. you did a great job with yours. I remember that time too and feeling so HAPPY for those people. It was an awesome decade!!! (90's though, was rather forgettable, haha). You rocked it, Rhonda.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/19/2015 3:18:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea...I'm going to add the form to the bottom of my poem. Yes, it is a Quatern without the syllable count. (I didn't want to be restricted.)
Date: 11/18/2015 12:06:00 PM
forgot the rating, 7
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Date: 11/18/2015 12:05:00 PM
Powerful change when the winds begin to blow -- your words captures the deep longing people have when held in servitude to a state sponsored bondage. May you always feel the wind and feel the hope of a warm sun.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/19/2015 3:08:00 AM
A self-made prison is still a prison, but I have a hope. Thanks for the encouraging words, David. They mean a lot to me.
Date: 11/18/2015 6:05:00 AM
I can feel the windy changes in this Rhonda, Nicely written, good luck in the contest Best Wishes Kevin
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/18/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thanks, Kevin! I appreciate your visits and kind words.
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