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Songs of Power--Something Inside So Strong

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Your lame excuse is floating on the wind. It really doesn't matter what you said. I know you don't regret that you have sinned, For words can't fly if weighted down with dread. Could you see falseness in the mirror when, I looked at you and could not even see? I wish it had been so much clearer then, And I'd possessed the common sense to flee. I stayed with you much longer than I should. Friends tell me you were faithless from the start. Had they let on it would have done no good, I thought I held the truth within my heart. So leave with your words drifting in the breeze. My life's my power... this day I will seize. ………………………. 11/16/2015 Songs Of Power Contest for Silent One

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Date: 11/21/2015 11:08:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations. **SKAT**
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations Nette
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Date: 11/21/2015 10:22:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this fine write, my friend. A7
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Date: 11/21/2015 9:58:00 AM
Big 7 plus 93 more.....
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:16:00 AM
Loved your take on the song Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2015 6:50:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/17/2015 5:45:00 AM
"He who into the battle goes with faith in his heart is double armed." PLATO Greek philosopher 427-343 BC. A dynamic and beautiful poem, dear nette!
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Date: 11/16/2015 4:59:00 PM
"Shall this dream live....." I found this a nice change of pace. Hope the next "glittering nightfall finds you and yours well". Enjoy Thanskgiving! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/16/2015 3:18:00 PM
Awesome nette enjoyed reading very much love the theme. Be Blessed.
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Date: 11/16/2015 3:06:00 PM
Powerful testimony written with verve and grace, your signature style. I was there, Nette, beside the shrine :-). hugs!
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Date: 11/16/2015 2:53:00 PM
We are always looking for our strength...lovely nette
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Date: 11/16/2015 2:42:00 PM
Very well written Nette, I enjoyed all the strengths in this piece!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/16/2015 2:14:00 PM
Triumphant soul that cannot be chained by restrained freedom. Praises for a magnificent poem !
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Date: 11/16/2015 2:02:00 PM
Stirring poetry only for the brave. I have read only about the 1st People Power, still this eloquently displays your talent as the finest poetess here!
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