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Song Sparrow 

dawn and all is still

as song sparrow sweetly sings -

flourishing a trill


Aug. 16, 2021

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Brian Strand
Date: 9/24/2021 1:07:00 AM
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No,I use hiku Andrea for English language variations to distinguish(reserve) from translations of the Japanese haiku
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 8/27/2021 8:02:00 AM
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Hey he hey i am sparrow... so he sinds, listenm, salute alkas
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Howard Kerr
Date: 8/26/2021 5:25:00 PM
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Hi Andrea, Congratulations on this successful entry on merit. Howard
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 8/24/2021 10:24:00 AM
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Hearty congrats on your win with this mellifluous Haiku dear sweet friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/23/2021 6:23:00 PM
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Preciously penned Andrea, hope all is well, sending you a smile from across the mile :) congrats
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2021 3:44:00 PM
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Congratulations, Andrea. Your haiku is sweet as a song! Love ~ Mala
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/23/2021 10:15:00 AM
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So peaceful Andrea! The call of the sparrow "trilling" at sunrise is a very special experience. Your haiku brought me right into dawn and the sparrow's wake up call. Very lovely. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2021 5:29:00 AM
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Congratulations, Andrea!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/23/2021 5:18:00 AM
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Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/19/2021 1:33:00 AM
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Trilling ...
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/17/2021 4:44:00 PM
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Your haiku made me smile. I have many sparrows in the yard and one likes to come and sing daily. A gem. love phyl
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/17/2021 1:52:00 PM
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Yep you’ve just nailed a wonderful haiku Andrea, your final line is faultless, cheers David
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/17/2021 10:37:00 AM
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I went with the Sparrow as well! Gorgeous bird! Good luck in the contest!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/17/2021 8:02:00 AM
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i love the sights and sounds of morning... beautiful image Andrea! hugs
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Joseph May
Date: 8/17/2021 6:20:00 AM
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Wonderful write Andrea..
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 8/17/2021 5:44:00 AM
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Nice, Andrea! Your poems capture a rainbow of moods. ...Fran
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/16/2021 7:59:00 PM
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Andrea, mines 'twas a hard choice after hearing most, seems you've met your charm with the same fun as I, all the best my friend, Aloha!
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/16/2021 7:50:00 PM
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Great imagery, Andrea, good luck in the contest.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2021 1:06:00 PM
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charming haiku Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 8/16/2021 10:54:00 AM
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Lovely image of a songbird Andrea..Delice
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 8/16/2021 10:50:00 AM
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The song of the sparrow... so sweet... Lovely Haiku dear Ria... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/16/2021 8:47:00 AM
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So beautiful Andrea.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 8/16/2021 7:49:00 AM
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This is awesome. Gorgeous. God bless you with much love and a win :) Love, Gina
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/16/2021 6:44:00 AM
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Love this! Good luck in the contest, xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 6:24:00 AM
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Your haiku sings…it is a pleasure!
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