Song of the Carpal Rust

I see 
the radiation is rolling off my eyelids
right into the sclera
white to red
I can't remember how to pick grapes
with arthritis of the mind
going north towards
the wanderings of the crows
that found that the cows
have had all their ticks picked off their hide
with smiling teeth 
so hiding from you
seems an appropriate situation
as the cacti gel makes the tongue swell with words
that have a prickly nature
the ice on the fence post makes
for a new religious icon
and breakfast is nearer to your derangement
of conformity
the hogs are rife with anticipation
as the sun hatches
new moles on your 
soul
I see the contrast is too low
for this all to become an apparent
apparition to swallow
especially when everyone looks at the holes
in my hands
like they had a magical worm hole
to thinking correctly
anyway
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mchugh Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 7:04 AM
Awesome poem, brother.
Kendrick Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 5:28 AM
This one is filled with metaphors about life and your unhappiness with it. Nice job. Keep writing. Sara
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