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for the "Happy Birthday" Poetry Contest of Regina Mcintosh

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Premiere Contest WinnerSong of September

"September! I never tire of turning it over in my mind. It has warmth, depth, and color. It glows like old amber."  By Patience Strong

A hint of autumn I can feel
when summer walks away on August’s heels.
Melancholy visits me; I’m not sure why,
but my mind goes drifting like dandelion wisps
that many years ago 
I’d lightly blown and then wished upon.
Cotton candy swirls are dabbed 
onto an azure sky.
My birthday’s month I dearly love.
Oh, how sweet is September’s dawn.

Summer, however, wants to linger.
Through rows of grains he sweeps long gold fingers,
but my month elegantly tiptoes in,
her asters waving in the breeze.
I inhale her fragrance. Her slight wind
I can feel falling on my skin.
September acquiesces to cooler days and nights
by the time of the  autumnal equinox,
and leaves will start swirling soon.
Like bright scarlet cardinals, they take flight.

September disrobed is a sapphire night.
At break of day, she’s Morning Glory’s affection, 
and at twilight, awash with colors, a time for reflection.
I was born in the week of September’s start.
That is when my birth month broke my heart,
for a youthful romance was lovelier than any other rose
on my bushes in September that I'd ever seen before then.
Thus, sweet romance I still write . . . again and again.
Although actually a late summer baby am I,
I enjoy the fall even though sun soon grows stingy in the sky.
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George Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 5:44 AM
"September disrobed is a sapphire night. At break of day, she’s Morning Glory’s affection, and at twilight, awash with colors, a time for reflection." Love these lines. Yes, twilight eve awash with colors is indeed a time for reflection. Congratulations Andrea on your trophy win for this lovely poem.
Canerdy Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 7:44 AM
Andrea, CONGRATS on your well-deserved top win with this vividly descriptive piece! Janice
Puddifoot Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 3:48 PM
this is lovely writing from you, andrea, with a lot of vivid imagery - congrats on your top win! i'm a september baby too, but it is my least favourite month of the year, my fave being december :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 7:19 PM
You must like the snow?? Or maybe for Xmas? Thanks, Charlotte.
Ashley Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 8:29 AM
Dear Andrea, I was swept up in the tender beauty and romance of September and the poignant end of summer. Congratulations for your golden trophy win in Gina's contest. Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 7:20 PM
Thanks so much, Susan
Mcintosh Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 4:08 AM
Just loved this one. It's poetic in every line, breathing light across the September life... Congrats on your top win. God bless you always, love, Gina
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 8:24 AM
thanks, Regina. I worked so hard on this one and appreciate this trophy win. Thanks so much.
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December 24, 2024 at 4:43 PM
Lovely poetry Andrea, my birthday is in September too, a week before the end of the month… Beryl
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 10:44 PM
You must be Libra. I am in first week, Virgo. But Libra is my ascending sign!
Beaufort Avatar
December 19, 2024 at 4:53 PM
Andrea…we can tell how fond you are of this time of year. You’re making me smile!
Evangeline Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 10:13 PM
Beautiful poem, Andrea! I especially liked the line: 'September disrobed is a sapphire night'... I used to wish I was born a month late because I liked September's sapphire more than August's peridot.
Daniel Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 3:26 AM
Lovely poem on September, Andrea:)
Williams Avatar
December 17, 2024 at 9:38 PM
A beautiful lyric meaningful where romantic words and images unite seamlessly. thank you for sharing - Now let me take the opportunity to Wish you and your family a Merry and Joyful Christmas filled with peace, laughter and most of all the gift of health. Hugs Maria
Rolland Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 4:02 PM
a melancholic song, September is coming back at school too, and often summertime resists, beautifully written poet Andrea, thank a lot
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 8:24 AM
thanks, Yann
Tor Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 3:48 PM
Lovely write Andrea, enjoyed so much reading it and best wishes for Regina's contest.
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December 16, 2024 at 2:23 PM
Very beautiful poem dear lovely Andrea! Have a wonderful season :-)
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December 16, 2024 at 11:37 AM
Hello Andrea, you know September is a good month. My niece born in September. Also my great niece .Merry Christmas. and all the best for the new year. /Hugs. Darlene/
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December 18, 2024 at 4:09 PM
Hello Andrea, wow! It must be hard to keep tract of the birthdays. Merry Christmas. All the best for the New Year. Hugs. /Darlene/
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 1:21 PM
Congrats for your niece. I have a sister and daughter born in Sept. We are all Virgos!
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December 16, 2024 at 10:51 AM
Dear Andrea, Well, I love the autumn and September kicks it off and your poem definitely evokes feelings of nostalgia and bittersweetness. I truly loved your internal, emotional landscapes. "Cotton candy swirls are dabbed onto an azure sky" and "like bright scarlet cardinals, they take flight". Oh that personal part where there is lost romance and its connection to September is heart touching. So Heartfelt! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 1:21 PM
thanks, Daniel
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December 16, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Dear sweet andrea, wow this is so beautiful, I absolutely love the way youv written in such a descriptive manner and in such a lyrical way too, i especially love “ for a youthful romance was lovelier than any other rose on my bushes in September that I'd ever seen before then.” this surely is so touching and soulful! The imagery and word choices here makes this one worthy of high placement. Best wishes for the contest ! I think youv done very well. Sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 1:20 PM
I really enjoyed this challenge. Hope Gina likes my month!
One Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 10:03 AM
You have written a wonderful poem about September and highlighted your birthday month very well...
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 10:08 AM
Thank you.
Read Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Hi Andrea, I was born on a cold winter's day in January, not one of my favourite seasons, sending you my love and best wishes God bless. xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 10:08 AM
oh my, that's my least favorite month. hahaha. Sorry about that, John!!
Hind Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 9:39 AM
This was really beautiful, Andrea - I loved your images "when summer walks away on August’s heels." ..."actually a late summer baby am I, I enjoy the fall even though sun soon grows stingy in the sky." ending, perfect <3
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 10:08 AM
thanks so much, Paige.
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