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for the "Happy Birthday" Poetry Contest of Regina Mcintosh

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"September! I never tire of turning it over in my mind. It has warmth, depth, and color. It glows like old amber." By Patience Strong A hint of autumn I can feel when summer walks away on August’s heels. Melancholy visits me; I’m not sure why, but my mind goes drifting like dandelion wisps that many years ago I’d lightly blown and then wished upon. Cotton candy swirls are dabbed onto an azure sky. My birthday’s month I dearly love. Oh, how sweet is September’s dawn. Summer, however, wants to linger. Through rows of grains he sweeps long gold fingers, but my month elegantly tiptoes in, her asters waving in the breeze. I inhale her fragrance. Her slight wind I can feel falling on my skin. September acquiesces to cooler days and nights by the time of the autumnal equinox, and leaves will start swirling soon. Like bright scarlet cardinals, they take flight. September disrobed is a sapphire night. At break of day, she’s Morning Glory’s affection, and at twilight, awash with colors, a time for reflection. I was born in the week of September’s start. That is when my birth month broke my heart, for a youthful romance was lovelier than any other rose on my bushes in September that I'd ever seen before then. Thus, sweet romance I still write . . . again and again. Although actually a late summer baby am I, I enjoy the fall even though sun soon grows stingy in the sky.

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Date: 1/7/2025 5:44:00 AM
"September disrobed is a sapphire night. At break of day, she’s Morning Glory’s affection, and at twilight, awash with colors, a time for reflection." Love these lines. Yes, twilight eve awash with colors is indeed a time for reflection. Congratulations Andrea on your trophy win for this lovely poem.
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Date: 1/6/2025 7:44:00 AM
Andrea, CONGRATS on your well-deserved top win with this vividly descriptive piece! Janice
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Date: 1/5/2025 3:48:00 PM
this is lovely writing from you, andrea, with a lot of vivid imagery - congrats on your top win! i'm a september baby too, but it is my least favourite month of the year, my fave being december :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/5/2025 7:19:00 PM
You must like the snow?? Or maybe for Xmas? Thanks, Charlotte.
Date: 1/5/2025 8:29:00 AM
Dear Andrea, I was swept up in the tender beauty and romance of September and the poignant end of summer. Congratulations for your golden trophy win in Gina's contest. Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/5/2025 7:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan
Date: 1/5/2025 4:08:00 AM
Just loved this one. It's poetic in every line, breathing light across the September life... Congrats on your top win. God bless you always, love, Gina
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/5/2025 8:24:00 AM
thanks, Regina. I worked so hard on this one and appreciate this trophy win. Thanks so much.
Date: 12/24/2024 4:43:00 PM
Lovely poetry Andrea, my birthday is in September too, a week before the end of the month… Beryl
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/24/2024 10:44:00 PM
You must be Libra. I am in first week, Virgo. But Libra is my ascending sign!
Date: 12/19/2024 4:53:00 PM
Andrea…we can tell how fond you are of this time of year. You’re making me smile!
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Date: 12/18/2024 10:13:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Andrea! I especially liked the line: 'September disrobed is a sapphire night'... I used to wish I was born a month late because I liked September's sapphire more than August's peridot.
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Date: 12/18/2024 3:26:00 AM
Lovely poem on September, Andrea:)
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Date: 12/17/2024 9:38:00 PM
A beautiful lyric meaningful where romantic words and images unite seamlessly. thank you for sharing - Now let me take the opportunity to Wish you and your family a Merry and Joyful Christmas filled with peace, laughter and most of all the gift of health. Hugs Maria
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Date: 12/17/2024 4:22:00 PM
Stingy sun. We might add stubborn. He does what he wants. Awesome September poem!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/18/2024 1:20:00 PM
Thanks, Tom
Date: 12/16/2024 4:02:00 PM
a melancholic song, September is coming back at school too, and often summertime resists, beautifully written poet Andrea, thank a lot
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/5/2025 8:24:00 AM
thanks, Yann
Date: 12/16/2024 3:48:00 PM
Lovely write Andrea, enjoyed so much reading it and best wishes for Regina's contest.
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Date: 12/16/2024 2:23:00 PM
Very beautiful poem dear lovely Andrea! Have a wonderful season :-)
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Date: 12/16/2024 11:37:00 AM
Hello Andrea, you know September is a good month. My niece born in September. Also my great niece .Merry Christmas. and all the best for the new year. /Hugs. Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/18/2024 4:09:00 PM
Hello Andrea, wow! It must be hard to keep tract of the birthdays. Merry Christmas. All the best for the New Year. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/18/2024 1:21:00 PM
Congrats for your niece. I have a sister and daughter born in Sept. We are all Virgos!
Date: 12/16/2024 10:51:00 AM
Dear Andrea, Well, I love the autumn and September kicks it off and your poem definitely evokes feelings of nostalgia and bittersweetness. I truly loved your internal, emotional landscapes. "Cotton candy swirls are dabbed onto an azure sky" and "like bright scarlet cardinals, they take flight". Oh that personal part where there is lost romance and its connection to September is heart touching. So Heartfelt! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/18/2024 1:21:00 PM
thanks, Daniel
Date: 12/16/2024 10:31:00 AM
Dear sweet andrea, wow this is so beautiful, I absolutely love the way youv written in such a descriptive manner and in such a lyrical way too, i especially love “ for a youthful romance was lovelier than any other rose on my bushes in September that I'd ever seen before then.” this surely is so touching and soulful! The imagery and word choices here makes this one worthy of high placement. Best wishes for the contest ! I think youv done very well. Sending you light always
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/18/2024 1:20:00 PM
I really enjoyed this challenge. Hope Gina likes my month!
Date: 12/16/2024 10:03:00 AM
You have written a wonderful poem about September and highlighted your birthday month very well...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/16/2024 10:08:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/16/2024 9:43:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I was born on a cold winter's day in January, not one of my favourite seasons, sending you my love and best wishes God bless. xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/16/2024 10:08:00 AM
oh my, that's my least favorite month. hahaha. Sorry about that, John!!
Date: 12/16/2024 9:39:00 AM
This was really beautiful, Andrea - I loved your images "when summer walks away on August’s heels." ..."actually a late summer baby am I, I enjoy the fall even though sun soon grows stingy in the sky." ending, perfect <3
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/16/2024 10:08:00 AM
thanks so much, Paige.

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