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Song of Life

Their duet lasted over sixty years with each reflection, wrinkled lines designed togetherness expanded over fears, of failing bodies, being redesigned. Though eyes seem younger than the passing times, their yesterdays were gone to mem’ries field. Now roads are closed, yet dreams begin their climb while stealthy winds of silent changes yield. Their visions rest within tomorrow’s sun, eternity of richest scent of growth. The graze of mystery, redeeming one to fill his life with God, his centered oath. The angels came to escort from the land as song of life concluded, Master’s hand. Janet L Vick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/11/2013 11:00:00 AM
- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day,Janet. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/11/2013 7:10:00 AM
Janet, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda
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Date: 12/27/2011 9:58:00 PM
Just reviewing what you said here to my comment. Don't feel bad. I have many friends who find sonnets difficult. what do you usually write. Free verse people have the most difficulty with them. I think you are doing well with this one going by the looser definition of the modern sonnet and not always using iambic pentameter. It still has much the feel of classic sonnet!
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Janet Vick
Date: 1/2/2012 6:24:00 AM
Thank you for the encouragement. I still plug away writing sonnets. I don't like to be bested when muse is fighting with me.... Janet
Date: 12/23/2011 4:35:00 PM
Beautiful, Janet. I think I have met a fellow sonneteer!
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Janet Vick
Date: 12/25/2011 6:36:00 PM
Thank you. Sonnets still give me difficulty trying to write, but I keep trying. Thanks greatly for your review. Janet

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