Somewhere Some Quiet

It is very quiet tonight
You are talking in the language
Of twilight, 
Your river
Hesitates to shiver
However 
A swan shadow 
Molecules of el Dorado
Sitting in your eyes
Along with 
Nano crystals
Of warm ice
In a cool candle light
It is very quiet tonight 

It is very quiet tonight
In your eyes in dim delight
A romantic starlight
Weaving a magic of shade and light
That so softly excites
The honey flame
Of our lyrical poem
In this blissful quiet tonight
We will try it
We will see
This glorious glee
Of the edges 
Of our waiting sea
Of our bends and stretches
Our Cashmere graces
Our purple presses
So that
The starry chat
That we are at
Will be lovely writ
In the poem
Of our wonder words
Spoken and unspoken
In the dream doors
We have opened

And our instinctive candle
Lyrically lit
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23/12/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/23/2016 4:18:00 PM
Ah how sparklingly romantic poem dear, Probir! A seven my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/23/2016 6:22:00 PM
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Date: 12/23/2016 2:55:00 PM
- Lovely written, Probir - Best wishes & Merry Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/23/2016 6:23:00 PM
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Date: 12/23/2016 10:43:00 AM
Lovely Probir:) Sounds magical!
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Date: 12/23/2016 6:24:00 PM
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Date: 12/23/2016 10:05:00 AM
Nice poem! I enjoyed the flow in rhythm.
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Date: 12/23/2016 6:24:00 PM
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Date: 12/23/2016 8:28:00 AM
Very nice Probir :)
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Date: 12/23/2016 6:25:00 PM
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