Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Free verse

Somewhere On Top

SOMEWHERE ON TOP

Breathing free, I behold--

sash-like fluffy blue clouds

hugging mountain-waists.

Nearby, terrace of trees greets

and falls that warble deep.

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©O.E. Guillermo
05:20 PM, January 10, 2015
30 syllables

Sponsor	nette onclaud 
Contest Name	SOMEWHERE

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Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2015 at 10:17 PM thank you for the reply...PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 15, 2015 at 1:53 AM As lovely as ever Olive! wonderful pic painted my dear! Congrats on fine win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 15, 2015 at 6:49 AM thanks much dr. UPma.. :)! God bless you..

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2015 at 12:48 AM yours was really unique and I remembered it easily. Congrats, it is a very nice poem. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 15, 2015 at 6:48 AM thanks much Andie.. :)! God bless you.. :D!

Poet Destroyer A January 14, 2015 at 9:31 PM Olive, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 15, 2015 at 6:47 AM thanks much Lolly Linda.. :)! hugs

James Fraser January 14, 2015 at 4:24 PM Many congratulations Olive with this little gem, with such delightful imagery, James :) x :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 15, 2015 at 6:46 AM thanks much James.. :)! Grats too.. :D

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 14, 2015 at 10:17 AM Hi Olive Congrats---love--rajat Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 15, 2015 at 6:32 AM thanks much Rajat.. :)!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 13, 2015 at 10:43 PM A beautiful, tranquil somewhere, Olive...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 15, 2015 at 3:16 AM thanks much Rhonda.. hugs too.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta January 13, 2015 at 9:45 PM Congrats on the win with this somewhere to be, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 15, 2015 at 3:15 AM thanks much Dr. Ram. :) GBU

Casarah Nance January 13, 2015 at 5:45 PM ooo-pretty. I love your unique style! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 15, 2015 at 3:14 AM thanks much Cassie.. ;) yours is a beauty too!

Paul Callus January 13, 2015 at 5:23 PM Congratulations Olive_eloi!! This had to be a winner!:) hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 14, 2015 at 8:48 AM Thanks much PAul.. :)! I appreciate it.. :)! Kayod5 Kayode January 13, 2015 at 5:29 PM Hi Great Paul,,nice to see you here...huggs

Jan Allison January 13, 2015 at 2:48 PM Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 14, 2015 at 5:05 AM thanks Jan :) hugs

Sandra Haight January 13, 2015 at 2:08 PM Hi Olive, congratulations on your win for your lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 14, 2015 at 5:04 AM thanks much Sandra.. :) God bless.. :)

Verlena S. Walker January 12, 2015 at 1:03 PM Lovely Olive. Rated 7 - Verlena Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 13, 2015 at 8:13 AM Thanks much VErlena.. God bless you always. :)!

Patrick Cooper January 11, 2015 at 4:53 PM I have to reiterate what others have said, this is fantastic imagery. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 12, 2015 at 1:15 AM Thanks much Patrick.. :) GOd bless you..

Paul Callus January 11, 2015 at 3:01 PM This imagery works well for you and for me! I'm sure that it will also be appreciated by the sponsor! Nature never fails to inspire! hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 12, 2015 at 1:03 AM I hope so Paul.. :) I wasn't late in submitting this time.. :D!

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2015 at 5:03 PM that was a unique and beautiful image of the cloud sash around the mountain's waist. Sure to tickle Nette's fancy! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 11, 2015 at 4:09 AM Thanks much Andie.. :)! I hope so it will tickle hers.. :)!

Jan Allison January 10, 2015 at 5:01 PM Such beautiful imagery Olive. I found this a tranquil calming write - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 11, 2015 at 3:56 AM thanks much Jan.. :)! I am afraid of heights but someday I really like to be in this situation.. :)! it's like I've touch heaven.. :)! hugs back