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Somewhere Around Midnight of October

In the middle of the moonlit valley, there stood an old haunted house, all alone. Weeds and woody vines weaving up its frame, pulling the old house down with endless groan. There stood an old haunted house, all alone, windows broken, and midst of roof caved in pulling the old house down with endless groan. Hollow groan gets deeper its tainted sin. Windows broken and midst of roof caved in, weeds and woody vines weaving up its frame. Hollow groan gets deeper its tainted sin. In the middle of the moonlit valley. 10/3/2019 Poetry Contest: Poet's October Pantoum' Sponsored By: William Kekaula How Many Syllables

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Date: 11/9/2019 6:10:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. I admire your picturesque poems, and this one exemplifies your "painting" talent --- through words, once again... God bless you.
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Date: 11/8/2019 2:53:00 PM
Vivid sights and sounds of midnight in October..congrats Eve on your win in the contest.
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Date: 11/7/2019 4:43:00 PM
I love the way you frame beauty, and your pantoum is a work of art, Congrats on your win dear Eve. xo
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Date: 11/7/2019 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations Eva, Wonderful imagery that puts 88you right in the middle of the experience.
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Date: 11/7/2019 12:13:00 PM
Enjoyed this wily piece you have written for your pantoum that is worthy for its high placement, thank you for entering my contest ~ Aloha always William
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/7/2019 2:12:00 PM
thank you so very much for my placement, William , I am very honored to have placed. Hugs Eve
Date: 10/4/2019 10:52:00 AM
This was fantastic Eve. You have created an eerie but wonderful vision with your words. I remember a house just like this when I was a kid. We would always ride our bikes on the opposite side of the road because we feared it was haunted.
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Date: 10/4/2019 8:09:00 AM
- An admirable poem, dear Eve :) - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2019 5:23:00 AM
And it groans and groans...there's magic here...I like it...
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Date: 10/4/2019 2:23:00 AM
A terrific pantoum, Eve. I like it ever so much! Beautiful as all of your poems always are.
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Date: 10/4/2019 1:07:00 AM
This is a wonderful pantoum form... I'm sure it's a winner. God bless you always :)
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