Somewhat By Not Quite

drawn to a sublime scent intimate
fearing the wafting elixir won’t wait
we opted to meld with the vast void
that our soul’s focus be not decoyed
but what arose, an ephemeral rose
seduced and then sank into repose
leaving hollow heart demagnetised
ethereal effervescence not realised
in as not as yet an ignition in renewal
whose pulsating radiance is continual
promoting us to dissolve identity more
that vibrant heart seeking an encore
in time aligns with frequency wherefrom
surreal magnetism creates a bliss storm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 4:58 PM
Deep and instructive poetry, Unseeking Seeker. Sometimes all we need is to let go more and go deeper into the experience of the bliss of oneness. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry, my friend.
Seeker Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Indeed, the depth depends upon how still mind is, the flavour on how pure heart is
One Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:47 AM
Woah you've weaved a wonderful wise poem here..
Seeker Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:07 PM
:)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 5:24 AM
Better make up your mind! Loved the idea of a blissful storm. Never seen one. Blessings.
Seeker Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 6:18 AM
It occurs when we are in a stillness continuum
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