Sometimes Love Is Not Enough

It was instant attraction without hesitation
We were meant for each other, two hearts…
Melting into one beautifully gentle song,
Almost creating a sincere connection of hope.

We dreamed the dream of shared passions
Opening our minds to the ultimate warmth…
Breathing into each other the sweetest joy,
A whisper of angel’s wings freeing our spirits.

There was a vision felt ascending between us
A hunger for merging all our finest dreams…
Persuading feelings that reach down to the core,
Touching a satisfying faith for what tomorrow holds.

We shared our thoughts and deepest inner treasures
Pure gold sparkled when our eyes made contact…
Whatever came we knew we would be there together,
In the most intimate relationship either of us had known.

Then, one afternoon, the ecstasy turned to mourning
What had been the answer changed into a question…
Would we ever overcome the transformation we felt,
In moments, our harmony became a disastrous storm.

We tried to remind ourselves of the past pleasures
The stars in our eyes turned to flashes of lost hopes…
Suddenly the worst days were there before us,
And we realized what we had was failing to nourish.

Finally, we decided to let go and leave the dream
What once was good had turned to remembrance…
Love, when lost, feels like someone must have died,
Yet, there is something inside that forgets if it was you or me.

September 9, 2019
Sometimes love is not enough Poetry Contest
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September 25, 2019 at 10:03 PM
Sorry for your pain. God has a plan. Sometimes it isn’t always evident but one day we see it. People come and go and each one teaches us something even the turd balls. Kelli
Agustin Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 9:25 PM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
La France Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Regina congratulations on your win
Poteet Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Heartfelt and realistic. Congratulations, Regina. Enjoyed the read.
Y. Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 12:59 AM
Hi Regina, You have penned such a heartfelt write that many can relate to. Although one wants to fall in love and stay in love forever, however sometimes love (relationship wise) doesn't last forever. And love just isn't enough. You expressed that fact very well in this well written piece. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a fantastic night:-) Alexis
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September 14, 2019 at 3:13 PM
Back with congrats on your first place win, Regina.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Thanks so much and bless you
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 2:27 PM
- Congratulations, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Thanks so much. Blessings
One Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 11:35 AM
This does seem very personal, and i think it is a poem many can relate with... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Mcintosh Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Thank you so much for the opportunity and inspiration. Yay. Blessings for you always.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 8:08 AM
You made this feel real. I hope it was not written from personal experience.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Somewhat personal experience, but the story would take years to tell instead of a few moments :) Blessings to you
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 7:19 AM
Your poem is true to life..love sometimes ends differently from the way it begins..heartfelt write, Regina.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 7:53 PM
So true... life isn't perfect, but mine has been so very blessed always. I hope yours is as well.
Andresen Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 3:11 AM
- We write about the same topic ... sometimes we have to leave our dreams - A beautiful poem with emotion, Regina - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 3:14 AM
Thanks so much. I appreciate your reading and wish you all the blessings in the world.
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