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Sometimes Dreams Do Come True

If my dream could come true I'd want to love someone exactly like you In life it's so hard to find the right one. But based on what I've heard and seen YOU'RE THE ONE! No matter what you'd do. I would love only you. If my dream could come true, There would be no problems. Life would always be rosy. We would travel the whole world over. Then We would find a home and make it into a paradise for two. We would have romance. We would have passion. There would be no secrets if my dream could come true. If my dream could come true. YES...If my dream could come true. I'd want to love someone exactly like you!

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Date: 3/21/2010 2:56:00 AM
A very romantic dream, Marty and congratulations on your winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/18/2010 4:34:00 PM
Congrats Marty on another winning poem in another wonderful contest.. a most deserved win for u to be proud of and so enjoy...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/18/2010 1:54:00 PM
Simply AWESOME Marty, what a most beautiful poem > many congratulations on your win in Carol's wonderful contest >> James
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:10:00 PM
You have me smiling with this one--sounds like a wonderful life to me. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Marty in my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2010 9:02:00 AM
Awesome dream come true Marty. Sound like a good one. Smile. Sincere Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/14/2010 3:59:00 PM
Marty, this is incredibly romantic >> James
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Date: 3/14/2010 1:44:00 PM
Check out Linda maries receant blog and comment on it.It is fun.
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Date: 3/14/2010 9:59:00 AM
I hope that your dreams will come true, Marty! Congrats on you recent success! I still have dreams, too, but don't belive that they will come true. Just listening to tunes from The Modern Jazz Quartet on youtube as background music on my PC. I found some records in the 70ies when travelling through Spain. Still got the without scratches. Thank you for your comments....Gert
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Date: 3/13/2010 11:58:00 PM
Congrats on your recent contest success Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words
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Date: 3/13/2010 11:07:00 PM
Yes they do I am still waitting 4 mine. I love this write . I find it easy, fun, with a great flow in your poem..enjoyed
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Date: 3/13/2010 7:52:00 PM
Great romantic write Marty. You do them so well! -Robert
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Date: 3/13/2010 7:01:00 PM
Thanks for your comments, they are the best "cream" for writer's block!!
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Date: 3/13/2010 1:24:00 PM
A beautiful dream Marty, nice work...Raul
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Date: 3/13/2010 6:03:00 AM
Great love write...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:34:00 AM
This makes me think. During the last half of a marriage, we make this dream come true by working hard and developing continued appreciation for the spouse. It's exactly the feeling you describe. Thais for your kind comment. I'm not sure they're here yet, but one day for sure. I wonder if they follow the prime directive.
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Date: 3/13/2010 12:34:00 AM
Congrats on your recent contest success Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 3/12/2010 11:24:00 PM
Romantic and sweet..and the lady you 'd love would have found a treasure as few..lovely dream.Charma
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Date: 3/12/2010 6:43:00 PM
A lovely poem and good luck i the contest. Thanks for reaing my post and yourkind comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/12/2010 12:26:00 PM
Wow Marty, I know you're good, indeed!! This is very beautiful... to love with all it entails...no secrets!! Because we all know what keepng secrets can do...Goes to my favs. today! Thanks for reading and leaving your kind comments on mine...your friend, Audrey
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Date: 3/11/2010 7:45:00 PM
Excellent dream which will come true for u .. a great write Marty and good luck in the new contest... all the things rolled into one poem from your creative pen..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/11/2010 9:41:00 AM
sounds wonderful, romantic
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