Marty Owens Poet Free verse

Sometimes Dreams Do Come True

If my dream could come true
I'd want to love someone exactly like you
In life it's so hard to find the right one.
But based on what I've heard and seen 
YOU'RE THE ONE!
No matter what you'd do.  
I would love only you.
If my dream could come true,
There would be no problems.
Life would always be rosy.
We would travel the whole world over. Then
We would find a home and make it into a paradise for two.
We would have romance.
We would have passion.
There would be no secrets if my dream could come true.
If my dream could come true.
YES...If my dream could come true.
I'd want to love someone exactly like you!

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Noel Villarosa March 21, 2010 at 2:56 AM A very romantic dream, Marty and congratulations on your winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 18, 2010 at 4:34 PM Congrats Marty on another winning poem in another wonderful contest.. a most deserved win for u to be proud of and so enjoy...luv.. "Sweetheart"

James Fraser March 18, 2010 at 1:54 PM Simply AWESOME Marty, what a most beautiful poem > many congratulations on your win in Carol's wonderful contest >> James

March 18, 2010 at 12:10 PM You have me smiling with this one--sounds like a wonderful life to me. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown March 18, 2010 at 12:08 PM Congratulations on your win Marty in my contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman March 15, 2010 at 9:02 AM Awesome dream come true Marty. Sound like a good one. Smile. Sincere Agape, Moses

James Fraser March 14, 2010 at 3:59 PM Marty, this is incredibly romantic >> James

Colleen Bono March 14, 2010 at 1:44 PM Check out Linda maries receant blog and comment on it.It is fun.

Gert W. Knop March 14, 2010 at 9:59 AM I hope that your dreams will come true, Marty! Congrats on you recent success! I still have dreams, too, but don't belive that they will come true. Just listening to tunes from The Modern Jazz Quartet on youtube as background music on my PC. I found some records in the 70ies when travelling through Spain. Still got the without scratches. Thank you for your comments....Gert

Brian Strand March 13, 2010 at 11:58 PM Congrats on your recent contest success Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words

Skat A March 13, 2010 at 11:07 PM Yes they do I am still waitting 4 mine. I love this write . I find it easy, fun, with a great flow in your poem..enjoyed

Robert A. Dufresne March 13, 2010 at 7:52 PM Great romantic write Marty. You do them so well! -Robert

Doris Culverhouse March 13, 2010 at 7:01 PM Thanks for your comments, they are the best "cream" for writer's block!!

Raul Moreno March 13, 2010 at 1:24 PM A beautiful dream Marty, nice work...Raul

Sara Kendrick March 13, 2010 at 6:03 AM Great love write...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Duke Beaufort March 13, 2010 at 5:34 AM This makes me think. During the last half of a marriage, we make this dream come true by working hard and developing continued appreciation for the spouse. It's exactly the feeling you describe. Thais for your kind comment. I'm not sure they're here yet, but one day for sure. I wonder if they follow the prime directive.

Brian Strand March 13, 2010 at 12:34 AM Congrats on your recent contest success Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Charmaine Chircop March 12, 2010 at 11:24 PM Romantic and sweet..and the lady you 'd love would have found a treasure as few..lovely dream.Charma

Joyce Johnson March 12, 2010 at 6:43 PM A lovely poem and good luck i the contest. Thanks for reaing my post and yourkind comments. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick March 12, 2010 at 12:26 PM Wow Marty, I know you're good, indeed!! This is very beautiful... to love with all it entails...no secrets!! Because we all know what keepng secrets can do...Goes to my favs. today! Thanks for reading and leaving your kind comments on mine...your friend, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 11, 2010 at 7:45 PM Excellent dream which will come true for u .. a great write Marty and good luck in the new contest... all the things rolled into one poem from your creative pen..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Doris Culverhouse March 11, 2010 at 9:41 AM sounds wonderful, romantic