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sometimes

sometimes it's all too much
and i don't think i can go on
then i remember you
how happy we once were



AP: Honorable Mention 2026, Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rolland Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 7:44 AM
delicate poetry, we know that a muse is essential for a soul to exist and "endure" destiny, enjoyed your poem
Gauthier Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 1:50 PM
thank you so much, Yann ~ most appreciated
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