Sometimes

sometimes
in the middle of the night
a bad poem will wake
screaming “burn me”
But then
i just have to ask
how do you know without
sitting quiet
for a bit?

sometimes
in the middle of the night
a good poem cries
to be heard
i can pretend not to know
But then
I silently turn the page
and wipe you away
so I can feel

the depth of my sorrow
the height of my ecstasy
the flush of
rage, of love
the whirlpool of my
words, just out of reach
trying for meaning
metaphors in soaring flight
But then

in the middle of the night
sometimes
a poem survives

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Date: 8/12/2020 3:11:00 AM
Hello Jeanne mam, Enjoyed your Whirlpool of words..:-) In the middle of the night a poem survives to inspire us:-D.. Hope you well.Take care.Have a lovely day. Much love sent to you:-)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/12/2020 8:56:00 AM
I am doing well...getting ready for my return to Mexico...which is probably why the whirlpool has been swirling faster these days. Hope you are doing well too. :D
Date: 8/11/2020 12:48:00 PM
It's been a while since I've been inspired by a dream...I guess I daydream now...I like the journey you've described here in your poem...
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/12/2020 8:55:00 AM
I love my daydreams best...but sometimes I get exhausted from the words in the whirlpool of thought.
Date: 8/11/2020 6:18:00 AM
"metaphors soaring in flight...in the middle of the night" Why is it that poets wake up in the middle of the night with these rhymes in their heads; we all do it. I enjoyed this wonderfully written poem, Jeanne. Hugs, John
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/12/2020 8:52:00 AM
Hi John...it's not a bad way to wake up though, with words wanting to be expressed so I can go back to sleep. It must be a poet thing...whether we write music, poetry, stories...
Date: 8/11/2020 4:30:00 AM
I love the quote and your poem, Jeanne. Poetry is subjective to any reader, but we write what lies in our mind and heart.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/12/2020 8:53:00 AM
Hi Jenna, it's so true, we just have to get it out, don't we, and let others take from it what they will.
Date: 8/11/2020 2:07:00 AM
Intriguing little write, Jeanne:) poetry itself is so:)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/12/2020 8:53:00 AM
It is so!
Date: 8/10/2020 10:04:00 PM
This poem made me smile and dance a little bit, for I can relate so hard to it!
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