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I just need to wrap around you like a poetic syllable, and feel your words sliding along . . my paragraphs _________ * Will you hold me like poetry?? *

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Date: 4/4/2023 6:10:00 AM
I like the sensual metaphors in this lovely write Brandy, hugs
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/4/2023 6:56:00 PM
I'm smiling and blushing. Thank you, Joseph. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 4/3/2019 3:56:00 PM
GOOD
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/4/2019 12:48:00 PM
Thank you Arturo. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/11/2018 12:52:00 PM
Simply beautiful.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/11/2018 3:40:00 PM
Thank you DM. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy
Date: 6/29/2018 11:04:00 PM
Brandy.. your writing style is completely unique, making one eager to "slide along" your poetic works! This write is fabulous...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/29/2018 11:16:00 PM
Oh my!! I am blushing. Thank you Lyric Man for your sweet words. I truly enjoyed writing this. ~ Brandy

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