Sometimes

I just need to wrap around you like a poetic syllable, 
       and feel your words
sliding along
. . my paragraphs



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* Will you hold me like poetry?? *
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May Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 6:10 AM
I like the sensual metaphors in this lovely write Brandy, hugs
Nicole Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 6:56 PM
I'm smiling and blushing. Thank you, Joseph. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Michael Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 3:56 PM
GOOD
Nicole Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 12:48 PM
Thank you Arturo. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Babbit Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Simply beautiful.
Nicole Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Thank you DM. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy
Man Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Brandy.. your writing style is completely unique, making one eager to "slide along" your poetic works! This write is fabulous...
Nicole Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Oh my!! I am blushing. Thank you Lyric Man for your sweet words. I truly enjoyed writing this. ~ Brandy
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