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Somethin's Fishy

I am not a fish Yet in this bowl I'm living Swim up to the side Press my big lips to the glass People gawk and hoot at me! By Deb Wilson **for contest"Tanka Me A Dream" sponsored by Michael J. Falotico

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2011 2:09:00 PM

LOL well I guess this is not a reply to alovers haiku...shiver dreams can be very freaky! Here i will write you a lovers haiku you reply in a tanka [Deb pretends she is a boy] dry stalks wither bent/ remembering flowering/ melon lips parting..take it away baby!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/15/2011 2:24:00 PM

That is one hell of a dream! You have described it well with your chosen words.

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/15/2011 7:43:00 AM

thats cute Deb,good luck in the contest

Poet Tacito

Date: 2/15/2011 5:53:00 AM

Damn, well done Deb. Gawking & hooting, not cool. I feel this piece.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2011 5:53:00 AM

All of us who have fishies have seen this once or twice Deb.. a cutie early in the morning read my friend.. hope u enjoyed a great Valentine's Day luv..