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Somethin's Fishy

I am not a fish
Yet in this bowl I'm living
Swim up to the side
Press my big lips to the glass
People gawk and hoot at me!




    By Deb Wilson
**for contest"Tanka Me A Dream"
sponsored by Michael J. Falotico

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Debbie Guzzi

February 20, 2011 at 2:09 PM

LOL well I guess this is not a reply to alovers haiku...shiver dreams can be very freaky! Here i will write you a lovers haiku you reply in a tanka [Deb pretends she is a boy] dry stalks wither bent/ remembering flowering/ melon lips parting..take it away baby!

Robert Pettit

February 15, 2011 at 2:24 PM

That is one hell of a dream! You have described it well with your chosen words.

Francine Roberts

February 15, 2011 at 7:43 AM

thats cute Deb,good luck in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 15, 2011 at 5:53 AM

All of us who have fishies have seen this once or twice Deb.. a cutie early in the morning read my friend.. hope u enjoyed a great Valentine's Day luv..