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Something Was Watching Me

I felt like something was watching me As I followed my children on the path around the lake I saw nothing, so was still, looking. Expecting to see a deer bound away. A flash of white tail. Or hear a splash in the water. It is a brown gray day; there is nothing Yet I sense it with all of my being. So I stand listening, watching, waiting. The bark of the tree in front of me begins moving. I watch, fascinated, as a tiny sliver of a brown snake slithers down. She zigzags through the grass, away from me and I smile. Knowing that we have communicated telepathically somehow. Maybe she is a mother too, following her own children around the lake.

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Date: 2/17/2021 5:51:00 PM
Seeing things from a different angle, being in touch with nature!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/17/2021 6:23:00 PM
I am totally in touch with snakes apparently
Date: 2/17/2021 1:55:00 PM
interesting how we sometimes sense things and even communicate with nature, too. i enjoyed this, caren...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/17/2021 6:23:00 PM
Thank you Ilene
Date: 2/17/2021 8:02:00 AM
Ohhh, are you not scared of brown snakes? I have heard they won’t touch you as long as you don’t move!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/17/2021 6:24:00 PM
I am not afraid of snakes. I have saved several from my cat's mouth, and I have stepped around others.

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