Something Was Watching Me

I felt like something was watching me 
As I followed my children on the path around the lake
I saw nothing, so was still, looking. 
Expecting to see a deer bound away.
A flash of white tail. Or hear a splash in the water.
It is a brown gray day; there is nothing 
Yet I sense it with all of my being.
So I stand listening, watching, waiting.
The bark of the tree in front of me begins moving.
I watch, fascinated, as a tiny sliver of a brown snake slithers down.
She zigzags through the grass, away from me and I smile.
Knowing that we have communicated telepathically somehow. 
Maybe she is a mother too, following her own children around the lake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 5:51 PM
Seeing things from a different angle, being in touch with nature!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:23 PM
I am totally in touch with snakes apparently
Bauer Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 1:55 PM
interesting how we sometimes sense things and even communicate with nature, too. i enjoyed this, caren...
Krutsinger Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Thank you Ilene
Brul Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 8:02 AM
Ohhh, are you not scared of brown snakes? I have heard they won’t touch you as long as you don’t move!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:24 PM
I am not afraid of snakes. I have saved several from my cat's mouth, and I have stepped around others.
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