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Something Old, Something New

People leave like seasons change Followed by grief and sadness Tears flow, a chaotic scene Reminding myself of the madness Wrenched away in the nick of time Loving this hard and this much Is reserved for the one, with care in their heart For all of me and such October 19, 2021 ~ Ms. Affection Contest: Something Old – Something New Sponsor: John Lawless Original: The Tsunami of Loss I lose people, and amid the tsunamis of grief and sadness that follow, I remind myself, when finally chaos tears dissolve and the aftermath of thoughts is allowed: “Silly child, you should know better than to love anyone this much by now, every time you have loved this hard and this much, you know it will be wrench away from you somehow Nikita Gill

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/21/2021 7:08:00 AM

Love feels so good. Grief is that love torn asunder. But still we must believe in it. I agree with Victor.

Ms Affection
Date: 10/21/2021 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Kim. You are always so encouraging.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/21/2021 2:05:00 AM

My friend, if you wish to get comments, you need to read and read until like me you become sick. For it is a pity that such an effort got no comments. You deserve more.

Ms Affection
Date: 10/21/2021 9:58:00 AM

Hi victor. Thank you for the input. Can you please expand on your comment as I want to GROW in my writing and value your feedback (I didn’t fully understand)