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Something Isn'T Right

A chorus of raw throats rasp out warnings then quieten, leaving an edgy silence twitching on the lips of a morning or riding the ticker moving across the bottom of a television screen. Something isn't right. There's an unease that seems to be leaking out of lesions in the carnage to come, a slow festering as if all life was waiting for a finger to squeeze the trigger of a loaded gun. And yet good people go about their lives as they normally do, saying their prayers, helpless, riled or for some, not wishing to care, though somewhere, hidden in a hollow at the back of a head, a dark is stirring from its sleep, getting ready to rise from its bed. Elsewhere, across a nation, more and more screams become stuck in the throats of the dead. Something isn't right.

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Date: 4/18/2023 6:46:00 AM
Eek I know what you mean but I'll erase that I know as thoroughly as I can. I'm conscious the shifts that are happening suggest demise in a myriad of ways. Therefore I will forget about it as there's not a thing I can do and look forward to something or other to take my mind off it. I'm already very good at going mad and don't need reality to get me over the line.
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Date: 4/18/2023 6:32:00 AM
Honestly Paul I believe we have passed the tipping point and we are on the way down. A really good read. I hope you are well.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/18/2023 7:14:00 AM
Hope its not the tipping point...we have a deep affinity with Americans and feel troubled and sad with the degree of violence, particularly mass shootings, that are reported. I wrote this poem out of such feelings. Thanks mate, valued

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