Something About Me

Not very humble but I dare say out loud - There is something about me of which I’m proud. That’s not what I asked for, much less than I sought - Iron clad patience I was patently taught. So much by my parents, more so by my friends, A lot by my husbands through break ups and mends. I considered I was quite well equipped til My girls, taking over the throne, bent my will. I, from that fresh irreversible point on Participated in patience marathon. Note, that in that blind-sided, nerve-racking run In full compliance I was the only one. The first lesson taught in a blink of an eye - Life was neither ‘bout me, nor myself, nor I. A brand new concept was born - “at any price”, Under sophisticated name “sacrifice”. (And no, no compromise) While braiding hair and cuddling I had no clue, Grownup daughters’ ups and downs would be mine too. Three of them, plus me, plus hectic hormones’ kick - Ride to hell and back, never mind thin and thick. Long run didn’t run out of patience punning - My girls grew up and I grew old - still running! P.S. Patience paid off, it excelled with my offspring - Now my grandkids get away with everything! March 23, 2023 Sponsor: Jaymee Thomas Contest: Expertise

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Date: 3/24/2023 5:40:00 AM
Having children requires a lot of patience; I am still learning. But you my friend have done well by your girls!
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Date: 3/23/2023 10:31:00 PM
Nothing to test your patience like children, Margarita, you are blessed to have three girls:) P. S: couldn't open your latest soupmail again!!!
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Date: 3/23/2023 11:25:00 AM
-... smiling ... ... almost the same highway as mine, Margatrita :) - hugs
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/23/2023 12:02:00 PM
I bet it’s the same parental pot of miscellaneous minor ingredients we are in:) Raising the glass to all of them! Love conquers all!
Date: 3/23/2023 10:19:00 AM
Funny! Very well written, Maggie. I am certain every parent will be able to identify with this one. Especially the "sacrifice" but in the end, it all works out because payback is hell. (spoiling the grandkids)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/23/2023 11:59:00 AM
Payback is worth it:) Thank you!
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