Someone That Looked Like You

I saw her on the tram

I saw you on the tram

It wasn’t you

It was someone that looked like you

*

Looked a lot like you

The color of her hair

The way she moved

Her face, but not her nose

*

She stepped on, went off

Before my tram stop

I had seen my surgeon

Not my day; that day

*

I saw her on the tram; again

It wasn’t you

Looked so like you

So close; but not you

*

I loved you then

You left; closed the door

I believed the door was closed shut

I believed I had walked away; free of you

*

She stepped on, went off

Before my tram stop

I had seen my surgeon that day

From sundown to sunrise; that day

*

I looked around; on the tram

Sitting there alone

Thinking of you

Thinking:

*

Do I turn around

Do I have to turn my head

Must I turn around; now

She sure looked a lot like you
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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Hello Jo Hofeeth, we all have a lost love somewhere. Sonice to meet you. enjoy your day my friend.
Deo Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 6:08 AM
Wonderful, showcasing you know poetry! Repetitions, and the uncertaintly of : "I saw her on the tram; again It wasn’t you Looked so like you" What's a person to do? Ask the Muse
Hofseth Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Love lost lingers. It wasn’t love lost. Lost love; turned my head. Thank you kindly
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