Someday Youll Fly

Responding to the lightest touch of an 
angel, she sings words of praise to her friends
calling their names in desperation to be 
heard. Falling more with each night spent alone and 
empty: her wings have forgotten how to fly...
Living a life full of deception and need.

Keeping secrets hidden from the prying eyes of
adults and foes of all ages; she's spent 
years alone. Calling, wishing, wanting...
Learning after each mistake how to let go and live on,
even though life can be harder than death...
Early she learned to hide her feelings and try to: 
never fall for those around her...

Still this butterfly waits to be free: 
untied and unfettered for the chance at being more than a
living doll. More than just one night after another of pills and needles...
Living one more day in search of her reason to live,
inch by inch she grows and learns to be herself: 
varying by degrees and looking for her path...
Another lost soul looking for her reason for existing; 
never forgotten...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fisher Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 12:29 AM
I like this poem a lot. Coolest thing I've read in a while. I definatley relate to everything here. Thats what its all about. The solace found in the words of a fellow seeker of real passion in this life.
Freeman Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 9:16 PM
Congratulations on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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March 23, 2010 at 4:12 AM
Fly butterfly on your true course...the course of your soul. Congratulations Rachel, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rachel. Love, Carol
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March 22, 2010 at 4:58 AM
Congrats on the featured poem---well done!!
Fisher Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 12:17 PM
Many congrats on your wonderful featured piece. Rgds Janette
Bono Avatar
November 27, 2009 at 1:00 PM
I posted a new poem called The Time Has Come.Tell me what you think.
Bono Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 8:51 AM
people just don't understand me.This is a good poem.The only thing is my angel will never forget how to fly.I just can't take the pain any more and it's time to give up.I am tired of fighting.I have no more strength to fight.I hope you all remember me and my poems. goodbye
Pickett Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 7:31 PM
This is your best so far.. Keep them coming young paduan.....:JP]
Norman Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 3:10 PM
This was truly a very nice read, i think that things that you read and feel and in turn, resonate with and amplify your own feelings are the best. For me this poem is one of those ocasions. Love and light fellow human
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