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Someday

(this is a re-work of "Love's Sweet Remembrance" I posted a short while back, wanted to change some things while still keeping the original.) Someday by Amy Swanson Tenderness... longing... for your touch Eternity... of waiting... to embrace other half of my spirit; soul's mate. I feel you in my heart and though I cannot hold you... you are with me always every moment's lifetime each day's forever. your thoughts are mine and mine are yours for we are two of one... I have known you always; you are the song I sing. Flowing love... gentle heart... soul's touch... passion's warmth. I did not forget - I could not forget... gentle on the lips of my memory fiery in the depths of my soul. Eternal love, I will hold you always in my heart... until someday we are again as one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/8/2009 10:03:00 AM
Wow, this is so appropraite for me right now. I haven't seen my guy in a year, and I miss him terribly. Great job, I love your petry style, GREAT JOB!
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Date: 1/2/2009 9:18:00 AM
Hello Amy, thank you for your comment on Her Lover. A fluid longing moves throughout this poem Amy, beautiful !
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Date: 12/30/2008 1:47:00 PM
Absolutely breathtaking. Always hold onto Someday...for it will come. A most beautiful write. Our dreams define us and without them we are nothing. Well done. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/29/2008 2:57:00 PM
lovely and touching speaking to the unattainable; a habit i lost a long time ago. and don't regret missing it. but keeping hopes up keeps you young. thanks for your comment. john
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Date: 12/29/2008 11:45:00 AM
Wow, nice flow and great imagery Amy. Eternal love is what we all hope for. I hope you have a Happy and safe New Year...Raul
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