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Somebody Clipped My Wings

I don’t know where resilience comes from But it seems to be in short supply - There was a time when “true grit” meant something But for too many that idea died. Complaining and playing the blame game Seems to be the new status quo - “It’s not my fault my life’s a mess, It’s his or her fault you know!” Or its just dumb luck and I lost out On every opportunity - Poor, poor, pitiful me, Blame it all on my community. Or better yet it's those on the left I mean really, the “Extreme” far right - Yes, there to blame for screwing my game Along with my entire life. Don’t you see what they’ve done to me Those evil political goons? They’ve strapped a suicide vest on me Blowing my dreams up into sky blue. They told me I could win every time I competed or took a math test - “Everyone deserves to win because Everyone is trying their best.” You know little Johnny got a ribbon And I should get one too, It's just not fair he’s better than me Boo-who, boo-who, boo-who! So, it’s not my fault I’m lost in life And can’t even find my bearings - It’s not my fault I’m so depressed I lash out and resort to swearing. At all of you and this whole world too Filled with nothing but misery and pain - With a glass half empty instead of half full And nothing to venture or gain. I can’t help it if I can’t tie my shoes Or go out and look for a job - I tried that one time And nearly got robbed. Because the game is rigged against me And has been from the start - Every time I try to excel I get palpitations in my heart. Therefore, I’ll just go out and complain today About how I hate winter and spring - Because birds and bees will soon return But somebody clipped my wings. © Terrell Martin, 03/13/2025

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Date: 4/27/2025 7:08:00 AM
Just checking in. Hope you're doing okay
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Date: 4/27/2025 5:43:00 PM
Ok mate
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Terrell Martin
Date: 4/27/2025 5:39:00 PM
Hi Tom, thanks for checking in on me. I'm doing well just decided to go back to work full time (was semi-retired) and quite busy these days. Will try to catch up soon and appreciate your concern. All the best to you & yours my poetry friend. Keep on keepin' on. /// Terrell
Date: 3/26/2025 5:42:00 AM
Ha! The blame generation. Fortunately there are many young folks who really want to make a difference but yeah, increasingly we're living in an apathetic and paranoid society. Nice poetic lament Terrell
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Terrell Martin
Date: 3/28/2025 3:59:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. And you're right - there ARE countless numbers of young and older people who don't blame others and do the best they can to overcome life's struggles. I didn't mean to paint a broad stroke on everyone, but I do feel there's too much apathy in our culture today. Thanks again and enjoy your weekend.
Date: 3/26/2025 1:40:00 AM
An eye-opener about how much easier it is to blame your problems on society than actually take the initiative to defeat the odds, and rise up to the challenge. Life wasn't designed to be easy; in fact, it is quite literally designed to have ups and downs so we can learn to treasure both grief and happiness. I love this poem, and its impactful, meaningful lines. Be Blessed.
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Terrell Martin
Date: 3/28/2025 3:55:00 AM
Hello Hiba and thank you for reading and responding so positively to this poem. I think we all know somebody who could be the protagonist in this poem. Life IS hard and many people find it easier to blame others for their difficulties instead of seeing life for what it is - challenges and struggles that we all must learn to overcome in order to survive, succeed and overcome. Thank you again & "Write on," Terrell
Date: 3/24/2025 11:34:00 PM
So well penned, I have just come across your poems, absolutely amazing. Love reading them.
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Terrell Martin
Date: 3/28/2025 3:47:00 AM
Hi Pivotal, it's nice to meet you and I appreciate your interest in my poetry. I'm so glad you approve, and I look forward to reading your poetry as well. Enjoy the weekend. Thanks again, Terrell
Date: 3/24/2025 4:05:00 PM
It's true that society shifts a lot of pressure to succeed. Your poem tells the story splendidly.
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Terrell Martin
Date: 3/28/2025 3:45:00 AM
Thanks for reading, William. I appreciate your thoughts. Have a great weekend.
Date: 3/14/2025 6:46:00 PM
Dear Terrell, this fantastic poem effectively explores the themes of personal responsibility, resilience, and societal blame. You convey a perspective of vulnerability and victimization, indicating that numerous individuals today tend to focus on complaining and attributing blame for their challenges instead of embracing responsibility for their circumstances.
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Date: 3/15/2025 3:43:00 PM
Hello again, my poetic friend. Once again, you "Nailed it" in terms of going right to the heart of the poem and summarizing it better than I might have done myself. You're truly a gentleman and a scholar and a cloud of excellence never seems to leave you. Thank you again and I hope you're enjoying a pleasant weekend. Cheers, Terrell
Date: 3/13/2025 9:35:00 AM
This is so well-said, Terrell! Blaming the world for one’s shortcomings seems to be the way to go these days and that’s really a sad state of affairs. I also hate the whole “everybody wins” mentality - talk about setting a kid up for disappointment in life!
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Terrell Martin
Date: 3/13/2025 12:12:00 PM
Hello Irene and thank you a million-fold for dropping by and inserting your usual agreeable and uplifting thoughts on the matter at hand, namely stupid, selfish (adult) people who for whatever reason(s) simply refuse to grow up. For a more eloquent explanation regarding the motivation behind this poem I refer you to Deb M's comment below whom I regard as poetically talented and graciously kindhearted as yourself. Thanks again and have a Blessed weekend /// Terrell
Date: 3/13/2025 2:12:00 AM
Terrell ….just brilliant!! You nailed the preciousness of our society….children not allowed experience disappointment, loss and being told No! Real life experiences that creates resillence, strength of character and so forth….Debx
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Date: 3/13/2025 12:06:00 PM
Hi Deb, I had a recent encounter with someone close to me that brought these thoughts to the forefront of my emotionally distraught cerebellum and just knew I had to get these thoughts out of my head and into a poem before I decided to load my shotgun with buckshot and use that narrow-minded piece of selfish humanity for target practice! I think the poem was of better use of my talents and thank you for agreeing with the premise of it all. Warm hugs & Happy weekend my poet friend.

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