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Some Poetry Is Crap

Writing poetry makes no sense at all It springs out of nowhere and travels into nothing ness Lemons are nines and wildcats are chickens Metaphoric twists have my stomach in knots Iambic pentameter makes me want yell Dammit ‘er! I fling things onto a page on Monday That I do not recognize myself on Tuesday Not sure which personality wrote it Sometimes it is impeccably bad, and none claim it Abecedarian is fun for me, But makes no sense in any way Still I do it. Why? Why not? I have this high energy waiting to run, bounce, jump, slap and play. So I read flowery sonnets, and they give me pause I have tried to write prissy, Shakespearean but it does not like me. I don’t even like to read that crap. Yes, some poetry is crap. Some of it is marvelous, witty, funny, cheery and gay. You can take that both ways I do. Poetry is something I fling onto a page Some of my writing I eat for breakfast and some of it eats me. It is as simple as that.

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Date: 8/16/2020 12:02:00 PM
Hello Caren, poetry is so many things. yes some do. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/16/2020 4:47:00 PM
Hello Caren, enjoy your evening my friend. hugs.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/16/2020 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. Enjoy your day!
Date: 8/15/2020 8:49:00 AM
Poetry is abstract and subjective, so its a matter of taste.. Im a bit like you when it comes to writing.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/15/2020 9:39:00 AM
I throw some things onto a page thinking who would like it? And believe it or not - and sometimes I do not - some do.
Date: 8/14/2020 2:32:00 PM
There's no good poetry without bad poetry first. I suspect this is a simple rule that applies to all literary forms. I also suspect that most writers write from a compulsion, a force, an energy, a drive and desire to do so. It's something deep and spiritual within the person. Enjoyed the poem. Write on
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/15/2020 9:39:00 AM
It sure does seem like you have nailed the thoughts of a writer, my friend.
Date: 8/14/2020 10:56:00 AM
Oh so very cute. Love It. Your line, "Some of my writing I eat for breakfast and some of it eats me." So funny and true. Enjoy your wonderful day.............
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/15/2020 9:39:00 AM
Thank you Paula. It is the truth.

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