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Some poems’ births explode (full bore), life ends when written down, their flow makes toothpicks of my pen, brain chokes on truth laid bare, a flash that flares, a splash of cognac in cook’s pan (taste’s light!) While others grow more leisurely, gestation delicate, they lead me through more sylvan glens (where shadows live - a thing) and beams of light dance as leaves drift until thoughts’ breeze gets spent. I covet both but give free rein to muse that pays day’s rent for fear I’ll miss a gift life shares, perchance a golden ring! I rarely guess a poem’s end; I’m more its advocate and track my muse the best I can until day’s touched by night! My heart is this, to offer grace to fancies muse may dare embrace, hold dear. Lord, I feel blessed to be my muse’s clown. Krakatoa Kritic #007 December 7, 2022

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Date: 12/8/2022 12:51:00 AM
My dear Krakatoa, I share your exact sentiments about writing poetry. The problem arises when there is a contest; my muse won't cooperate with rules! Elizabeth
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/16/2023 3:04:00 AM
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES. So be it.
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Krakatoa Kritic007
Date: 12/8/2022 8:01:00 PM
A possible work around Elisabeth? I just imagine that God and I are one (not that I am God) and in this frame of mind every challenge title is a product of my own muse. Ha! The only real competition is my own muse, the rules are mine too!

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