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Some of My Favorite Things

Beautiful breeze and towering trees Delightful dishes and wonderful wishes Lover's lips and heavenly hips Isled icicles and boy blue bicycles Starry skies and pumpkin pies Weeping willows and puffy pillows These are some of my favorite things Alliterisen- 7 Line Poetry Contest Sequence#2 (9,11,8,10,7,9,9) syllable count Contest Sponsor: Joseph May 11/6/2021

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/1/2021 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Some Of My Favorite Things" is a wonderful write/story. "Love It" Have a blessed day.................

Constance La France

Date: 11/30/2021 9:52:00 AM

Charlie, wonderfully penned poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest, some of my fav things too ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2021 5:49:00 PM

Very nicely done Charles, Congrats on your win

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/29/2021 10:55:00 AM

Every line was a joy to read. Well written and winning congratulations, Charlie.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/13/2021 2:56:00 PM

Wow, Charles! Some of your favourite things are amazing indeed! Alliteration and syllable-count are beautifully done! BW ~ Mala

John Watt

Date: 11/12/2021 3:22:00 PM

Charlie, I'm not surprised to see we share so many favorite things, since we were born 2 days apart! Especially the beautiful breezes and starry skies... I know how much you love the great outdoors. Great work here on the rhymes, alliteration, and syllable counts... Best wishes in the contest, my friend

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/7/2021 3:04:00 PM

Loved these lines.... Heavenly hips, loverrs lips! Awesome! Hope you get number one. Pangie

Charles Messina
Date: 11/8/2021 4:23:00 AM

Hi Pangie, Ahh...As a man's view, some of god's finest creations! Thanks so much. Charlie xx

Natasha L Scragg

Date: 11/6/2021 5:49:00 AM

A great poem. Weeping willows are simply so beautiful! Brilliant rhyming in your list of favourite things. All the best in the contest.

Charles Messina
Date: 11/8/2021 4:24:00 AM

Hi Natasha, Weeping willows are my favorite trees. Especially when you see a lone one blowing in the wind :) thank you so much! Charlie