Jeanne Mcgee Poet Light Verse

Some Days I Hide While Daydreaming-Ct

I search my heart, craving your charms
I wish I may I wish I might
Tip Toe
Visiting the rooster 
Hiding on a swing taking care
Way, Way, Waaay Scary!
Did you Knock?
Teasing giggles echo
Speak softly, my feelings crumble
A goddess of the sea
Daydreams angels in clouds
Graceful beauty raining tears
Some days are like this
Let the wind blow through


Collaboration of your titles contest   2nd place
sponsor:  Charles Messina
Written:  7-7-2019

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Michelle Faulkner July 15, 2019 at 9:17 PM I enjoyed the feel of this story - some days are like this indeed - congratulations on your win, Jeanne! Jeanne Mcgee July 16, 2019 at 12:47 AM Thanks Michelle...it's always best to let the wind blow through...lol

Robert L. Hinshaw July 15, 2019 at 10:15 AM Congrats, Jeanne, for your masterful use of your titles in poetic form! Many thanks for your kind comments re my win. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob Jeanne Mcgee July 15, 2019 at 10:47 AM Thank you Bob...same for you too.

Richard Lamoureux July 15, 2019 at 8:50 AM One of my personal favourites. Congrats on your win. Jeanne Mcgee July 15, 2019 at 10:47 AM It's a fun journey for sure. Keep up the great writing Richard! and thanks for your comments.

Charles Messina July 15, 2019 at 2:54 AM Very nice Jeanne, your titles flowed well. My fav lines are "Some days are like this-Let the wind blow through" Great collaboration of your titles. Congratulations on your win! Charlie Jeanne Mcgee July 15, 2019 at 10:50 AM Thanks so much Charlie. It was a fun contest.

Alexis Y. July 14, 2019 at 12:15 PM Hi Jeanne, The titles you picked for the contest worked very well together. I enjoyed the read. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Thanks for stopping by my page. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Arturo Michael July 11, 2019 at 7:14 AM Let it blow away...really abstract...musing freely...

Jack Horne July 9, 2019 at 1:21 PM love this fun write Jeanne Mcgee July 9, 2019 at 10:03 PM Yes who would have thought our titles could become something so silly...like using book titles!

Sandra Adams July 9, 2019 at 9:54 AM nice job of arranging your titles, that last stanza had such vivid imagery, enjoyed the read! Good luck in the contest :) hugs Jeanne Mcgee July 9, 2019 at 10:03 PM Thanks so much Sandra. Good luck to all of your efforts too...I love seeing your poems at the top.