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Hiding Wishing escape Guilty burden shadow Over whelmed patience eclipsed Dying Dreaming Newly woken Truthful merging vortex Leaving staying spinning freedom Escape
written: 8-22-2019 copy-write protected 3rd place...If you only knew contest

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Date: 8/29/2019 4:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/26/2019 7:46:00 AM
Metaphorical, and poetical. I am thinking of earth, and what is happening to her even though you totally may have meant something else.
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Date: 8/22/2019 11:37:00 AM
Deep, thought-provoking, Jeanne. Janice
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Date: 8/22/2019 10:45:00 AM
I like how you wrote this. Nice one Jeanne :)
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