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SOLSTICE SENRYU

A sunny corner
Dandelions, hair gone gray
                              In a spiked farewell


A howling wind
An ogre trimming its beard
                               A solstice shadow


Nipping and sipping
A scattering of empties
                          Dancing in the snow


Rainbows of promise
Stained glass shadows in the snow
                                         Promises broken


Christmas promises
Lacking the honesty of 
                         A raggedy angel


Visible presents
Old dogs covered with tinsel
                               Toothless chew toys

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Date: 12/1/2023 10:40:00 AM
Especially love number 4!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/1/2023 10:49:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by my senryu shop Kim.

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