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Solstice Ploy

It’s cold beneath the fallen leaves the worms slow wriggle falls to sleep the tartan now a yellowed sash consumed by winter’s icy creep the rustle in the leaves just wind as squirrels wrap their tails around cold noses and an acorn stash beneath a hawks now distant sound Oh snow, cold snow, your carpet white reflects the sun’s now timid stance the darkness of your glaring light the sharpened point of Winter’s lance thus, do we wait on Solstice ploy thus, do we hold to season’s joy

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Date: 11/25/2023 10:30:00 AM
Well done!
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Date: 11/22/2023 6:20:00 PM
That final couplet seals the deal, John. Absolutely 'mahvelus,' ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/22/2023 2:30:00 PM
I delighted in your imagery, John! I could all but picture myself in your scene. I loved this line: Oh snow, cold snow, your carpet white reflects the sun’s now timid stance---beautiful image. Too early for snow here in Texas. We rarely receive snow until January or February. Even then it only lasts for a day or two except in 2021 when snow and ice shut down our power grid for almost a week. no fun! Enjoy your Thanksgiving, Sara
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Date: 11/22/2023 9:39:00 AM
beneath a hawks now distant sound…love that!
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