Solstice Moon

Her milky, placid orb peers o’er tan hills
As fades the mustard flame of father’s hate
Cool succor soothes sharp burns where rage did spill
His blinding cruelty will at last abate

Our blistered skin, bleached bones white, hills afire
This eve, his fevered madness starts to break
Grim Solstice marks the peak of father’s ire
Soft sunset’s silken shroud engulfs our aches

Sun’s dark flight, burning guilt now gone from sight
His dusty, wild siroccos brought to calm
This night's repose, world bathed in velvet light 
Pale, tranquil seas of Moon’s face like a balm

Pearlescent clouds drift mute across her sphere
Fair promise of monsoons, their healing tears

6/22/16

Shakespearean, Mostly Iambic Pentameter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lawless Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Some truly great imagery here Tom. Congrats on your placement in the contest
Quigley Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Thanks, John!
Haight Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Very creative imagery in your lovely Sonnet, Tom. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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September 12, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Thanks, Sandra!
Arnone Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 11:46 PM
I couldn't help it, Tom. When I read, "Her milky, placid orb," I couldn't control my laughter (in a good way). Sol's dysfunctional family of planets, moons and other bits and pieces. A beautifully written, Shakespearean sonnet. Congrats! :-)
Quigley Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 8:58 PM
...with a dysfunctional dad...:-) Thanks, Tom!
Scars Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Tom, this is beautifully written, congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
Quigley Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 8:58 PM
Thanks, Luloo!
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 6:45 PM
Tom, congratulations on your 1st place win beautiful written . Hugs Eve
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September 12, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Thanks, Eve!
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July 15, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Excellent. A winner.
Quigley Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 6:32 AM
Thank you, Phil!
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July 12, 2016 at 11:25 PM
Tom, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT
Quigley Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Thanks!
Merryman Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 4:37 PM
I enjoyed the creative imagery in this write, Tom! Congrats on your placement!
Quigley Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Thanks again!
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July 9, 2016 at 4:26 AM
Tomorrow Q., Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
Quigley Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Lindley Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 11:01 AM
TOP LEVEL SONNET MY FRIEND. Great rhyme, flow , imagery and pleasant painting of the night sky's queen..A7 Adding to my fav list as its a true sonnet gem..
Quigley Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 11:45 AM
Thanks, Robert! Again a great compliment from you!!
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 4:06 PM
this got me from the start ... so gracefully quilled, tom.. sigh!..huggs
Quigley Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 5:56 PM
Thanks, Nette! Means a lot coming from you. :-)
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 10:21 AM
what a delightful way to paint the soothing ways of Arizona nights. I have been down there when my in-laws used to live there. it was hotter than hell! I take it that is what you referred to by ridiculous! This has a great sonnet feel to it. Loved when you did enjambment, Tom
Quigley Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Yep, that's what I meant by ridiculous! Thanks for reading!
Merryman Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 2:37 PM
Tom, great descriptive language! Beautiful sonnet!
Quigley Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Kim!
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June 23, 2016 at 1:46 PM
- Tom, it's beautiful! ..... And it touches me - My fav. lines : "This night's repose, world bathed in velvet light Pale, tranquil seas of Moon’s face like a balm" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Quigley Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Turner Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 10:16 AM
I think it's a beautiful sonnet, Tom.
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June 23, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Thanks, Daniel!
Smith Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Nice sonnet Tom..Hope you get some relief.
Quigley Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 4:40 PM
Thank you, Tim!
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