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Diminished Hexaverse
A poem containing stanzas of 5 lines, then 4 lines, then 3 lines, then 2 lines, ending with one word. The syllables in each stanza correspond to the number of lines, i.e. 5 in each line in the first stanza, 4 in the second stanza and so on.

a whiff of the most extraordinary elusive fragrance, a titillating and yet, subtle smell Sol’s caresses linger longer, His tactile touch tender and warm songbirds sing snowmen slouch, snowdrops sprout. all signs point to spring (Diminished Hexaverse) 03,30,2019 Diminished Hexaverse Contest About Spring Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 5/11/2020 3:02:00 PM
Emile, your poem is beautiful and a great example for your contest _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/11/2020 9:52:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appropriate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2019 11:00:00 AM
A fave, Emile! Congratulations,
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/3/2019 12:31:00 PM
Thanks Kim, your honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2019 10:07:00 PM
"snowmen slouch/snowdrops sprout" love, love, love that! Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/3/2019 9:10:00 AM
Thanks so much P.S., your comments have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2019 7:39:00 PM
Back again to tell you congratulations. I think I love it even more reading it the second time!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/3/2019 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, your comments are always encouraging my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2019 7:49:00 AM
Brilliant and nicely flowing, Emile, beautifully penned:)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2019 10:31:00 AM
Thanks Jo, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/30/2019 7:54:00 PM
wow, I love the alliteration of the s's at the ending. Snowmen slouch. Such a cute line!! Love your hexaverse.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2019 9:31:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/30/2019 10:58:00 AM
A sure winner...some great phrases.." snowmen slouch" made me smile. BG
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Date: 3/30/2019 11:09:00 AM
Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.