Emile Pinet Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Sol's Caresses

A whiff of the most
extraordinary
elusive fragrance;
a titillating,
and yet, subtle smell.

Sol's caresses
linger longer;
His tactile touch,
tender and warm.

Songbirds sing,
snowmen slouch
and seeds sprout;

all signs,
point to

Spring.

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Constance La France May 11, 2020 at 3:02 PM Emile, your poem is beautiful and a great example for your contest _Constance Emile Pinet May 11, 2020 at 9:52 PM Thanks Constance, I appropriate it my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues May 3, 2019 at 11:00 AM A fave, Emile! Congratulations, Emile Pinet May 3, 2019 at 12:31 PM Thanks Kim, your honor me my friend, Emile.

P.S. Awtry May 2, 2019 at 10:07 PM "snowmen slouch/snowdrops sprout" love, love, love that! Congratulations! Emile Pinet May 3, 2019 at 9:10 AM Thanks so much P.S., your comments have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich May 2, 2019 at 7:39 PM Back again to tell you congratulations. I think I love it even more reading it the second time! Emile Pinet May 3, 2019 at 9:09 AM Thanks Andrea, your comments are always encouraging my friend, Emile.

Joanna Daniel April 5, 2019 at 7:49 AM Brilliant and nicely flowing, Emile, beautifully penned:) Emile Pinet April 5, 2019 at 10:31 AM Thanks Jo, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2019 at 7:54 PM wow, I love the alliteration of the s's at the ending. Snowmen slouch. Such a cute line!! Love your hexaverse. Emile Pinet March 31, 2019 at 9:31 AM Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Barbara Gorelick March 30, 2019 at 10:58 AM A sure winner...some great phrases.." snowmen slouch" made me smile. BG Emile Pinet March 30, 2019 at 11:09 AM Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.