Soloist

Seated on the sidewalk, 
singing under his breath,
a soloist in gray & black, 
performing the hard way
for pennies in his guitar case.
          
Focus closely now   
on the brown fold 
of undershirt closest to his body,
the almost white of his eyes, 
skin burned red. 
Hope’s long gone, 
turned blue in the dust
of his visible despair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gigno Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 9:13 PM
!!!
Jordan Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 10:30 PM
Thanks!!! J
A   Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 4:09 PM
A wonderful Poem Jack, love the blue imagery on the last 4 lines... always~ LINDA
Jordan Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 4:22 PM
Thanks! You're very kind. Jack
Bauer Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 2:40 PM
you've painted a very vivid picture here - well done!
Jordan Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 2:55 PM
Thank you for the comment.
Andresen Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 12:02 PM
A little lonely with his instrument ...... - Very well written, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 12:21 PM
He was a mighty lonely, down-trodden young man. He had a dog too, but it abandoned him. Thanks for reading. Jack
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