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Soloist

Seated on the sidewalk, singing under his breath, a soloist in gray & black, performing the hard way for pennies in his guitar case. Focus closely now on the brown fold of undershirt closest to his body, the almost white of his eyes, skin burned red. Hope’s long gone, turned blue in the dust of his visible despair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/8/2013 9:13:00 PM
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/12/2013 10:30:00 PM
Thanks!!! J
Date: 2/6/2013 4:09:00 PM
A wonderful Poem Jack, love the blue imagery on the last 4 lines... always~ LINDA
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/6/2013 4:22:00 PM
Thanks! You're very kind. Jack
Date: 2/6/2013 2:40:00 PM
you've painted a very vivid picture here - well done!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/6/2013 2:55:00 PM
Thank you for the comment.
Date: 2/6/2013 12:02:00 PM
A little lonely with his instrument ...... - Very well written, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/6/2013 12:21:00 PM
He was a mighty lonely, down-trodden young man. He had a dog too, but it abandoned him. Thanks for reading. Jack

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