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Solitude of Iris Incense Nightfall

Solitude of Iris Incense Nightfall Still solitude drips saffron in sunsets Twilight tinsel tames tangerine tempests Lilac lullaby lilts lulling lyric – Diadems of daydreams dulcet delight Offers ochre cheerful companion of calm Unruffled ultramarine universe Ebb of eventide in ebony escape 3-29-21 Contest: Solitude in Seven Lines Sponsor: JCB Burl Seven lines. Ten syllables each

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/26/2021 10:26:00 AM

Hey Greg, hold onto those prepositions! I may need them in the future! Thank you so much for your message of congratulations! For one, such as myself, born with the "verbose gene" these challenges are great mentors - like writing lyrics. And alliteration is a great playmate. Take care! Sending you blessings and gratitude for your always thoughtful messages.

Greg Gaul

Date: 4/25/2021 12:23:00 PM

Sam, Sam the seven line fan. Hey look, I have a few left over prepositions, if you need 'em. Seems the alliteration pool got so full that there was no room for me to jump in. Foot to the floor on this one Sam. Kudos and congrats. You knocked it outta the park!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/1/2021 8:16:00 PM

This put a spell on me, Sam, my favorite is 'Unruffled ultramarine universe' but all of it so captivating, should be a top winner!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/26/2021 10:20:00 AM

Hi Michelle! Am way behind answering messages! Thank you for your wonderful message. I am deeply complimented by your gracious words of compliment. Your messages mean so much to me. So grateful for the time you take to read and make such thoughtful comments! Hope you are well! Blessings to you!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/30/2021 5:56:00 PM

Wow! Sam, every time I read your poems, I am mesmerized! "drips saffron in sunsets" what a beautiful use of alliteration in describing solitude! Love ~ Mala

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/26/2021 10:15:00 AM

Hi Mala! Your messages always touch my heart with uplifting encouragement. Thank you dear friend! Alliteration and color were fun playmates for this poem. And I thought solitude was a great theme! Thank you so much. Sending blessings of "saffron sunsets" and a hug! Love ~ Sam

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/30/2021 10:56:00 AM

Great use of alliteration. Beautiful descriptions!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/7/2021 10:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Juliet. I enjoy developing images of alliteration. Hope you are well. Sending you warm wishes.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/30/2021 4:45:00 AM

Lovely. God bless you. Love, Gina

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/7/2021 10:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. I enjoyed crafting it. Alliteration is such fun! Hope you had a wonderful Easter! Sending you blessings of joy and hope for new life! Much love dear friend.