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Solitude By the Reverie

Sitting by the beach the lights of yesterday grow dim while the calming waves of terranas caress my reverie, the hotting sands bequeath their perfect light; A lull in time, a moment of grace and soon I apprehend it all with none; Nature's casting light and the deedle doddle of my skin beneath the burning sun; Palm trees breathe and I could swear this day was made for me.. Right here on this beach the world falls away and I'm too far to inch recall the boister of my kind Befitted for the sea I long for no one else but him Tonight, they'll be a little wine? a yellow dress? a dance mayhap? Romance?... May 29, 2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/16/2018 10:45:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Pixie. Well done.

John Gondolf

Date: 6/8/2018 8:32:00 AM

Pixie, back to say congrats on your win. John

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2018 8:11:00 AM

- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lu Loo

Date: 6/8/2018 7:39:00 AM

hopefully some romance! beautifully expressed sweet Pixie Dust, thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Brian Densham

Date: 6/2/2018 12:37:00 PM

"this day was made for me.." I love those moments. Nice work.

Ricky Muse

Date: 6/1/2018 12:20:00 AM

"the deedle doddle of my skin" is delightful.

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/31/2018 9:22:00 AM

Great entry Pix...all the best for a win...love and light...^WW^

James Inman

Date: 5/30/2018 9:03:00 PM

Lived next door for a couple of years. The islands are beautiful. Your poem touched me.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/30/2018 5:48:00 PM

I hope all your questions are answered satisfactorily. I enjoyed your poem Pixie.

John Gondolf

Date: 5/30/2018 10:09:00 AM

This poem took me there, Pixie, the day was made for me as well. I enjoyed it. John

Tim Smith

Date: 5/30/2018 9:16:00 AM

A beautiful poem

Silent One

Date: 5/30/2018 8:02:00 AM

What a lovely title..I wrote a poem about a silent reverie once.. I hope you find some romance..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/30/2018 6:55:00 AM

This solitude contemplates beauty and life and celebration and romance. What more can one ask for! Lovely depiction Pixie.

Robertina B.

Date: 5/29/2018 9:55:00 PM

"Beautiful free verse Pixie .. I enjoyed reading, it captured me completely... Amazing imagery as well.."

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/29/2018 9:33:00 PM

Like the commercial says,"Life's a beach" Nothing like moonlight dancing on water to set the mood for romance. Nice of you to take us with you, Pixie:)

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/29/2018 7:46:00 PM

Oh so delicately and exquisitely imagined and expressed, Pixie. 'Palm trees breathe and I could swear this day was made for me...' - your poem is full of magical moments and your breathtaking imagery takes me away.. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/29/2018 5:46:00 PM

Lovely reading. "And the deedle doddle of my skin," like you let everything go and dreamed....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/29/2018 5:31:00 PM

The reader can feel the love you have for this tropical beach. Sometimes we are blessed by such feelings when "the world falls away." A lovely poem! Hugs, Carolyn