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Solitude

Solitude, no thoughts- the echo in a seashell, an eloquence the soul sometimes yearns for, the calm. The ocean is a seashell. 02/08/2014 For "Mood Music" contest by Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Skat A

Date: 2/26/2014 9:33:00 PM

Connie, , thank you for setting the music and the mood with your winning. Poem. Congratulations:) Take Care ~SKAT~

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/27/2014 12:58:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by and for your delightful comment - Connie

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/26/2014 11:31:00 AM

Great thoughts, Connie. I am inclined to think that tinnitus has to do with solitude. Perhaps the lessening of active thought in the brain and the ensuing vacuum. I remember the words of one of my favorite aunts - "It was so quiet, I could hear the silence roar."

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/26/2014 3:45:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by and leaving your delightful comment. Much appreciated - Connie

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/24/2014 4:34:00 PM

so much said in few words Connie great imagery and pen hugs

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/25/2014 4:10:00 PM

Shadow thank you for stopping and reading my poems. Your lovely comment is much appreciated. Warm Hugs and Smiles, Connie,

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/24/2014 4:08:00 AM

Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,connie

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/25/2014 4:12:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram for your kind comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 2/24/2014 1:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Connie--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your wonderful imagery and mood. Thanks for entering my contest.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/25/2014 4:13:00 PM

Sheri it was a pleasure to enter your contest and thank you for a win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Gary Watkins

Date: 2/21/2014 12:09:00 PM

I love the way you bring the imagery full circle by linking the ocean to the seashell. It really crystallizes the theme.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/21/2014 2:41:00 PM

Thank you Gary for stopping by and commenting on my Tanka. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Jessica K

Date: 2/21/2014 10:06:00 AM

This piece is fantastic! I never would have thought to portray natures own tune so eloquently. Bravo!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/21/2014 10:11:00 AM

Jessica thank you for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2014 11:14:00 PM

wow, which contest is this?? I guess when I saw that particular contest, I did not realize one could make such an amazing poem from it!!! I just love this one and the sound seashells make.,

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/21/2014 10:10:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for stopping by and leaving a delightful comment. Much appreciated. I hope all is well with you. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/8/2014 10:12:00 PM

Sometimes I do yearn for the utter silence, the silence that can be achieved with peace and tranquility! I also loved the symbolism of the ocean is a seashell...very clever and awesomely done! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/11/2014 11:01:00 AM

Thank you Russell. You're very kind. Warm Smiles, Connie