Solitary Man

Solitary man in shadows without a face
I blush with lonely sting of longing from your eyes
With every reluctant step I falter my pace
How many times, my love, you've seen me passing by?

Do you remember when you saw me in the square?
I dropped my packages and quickly by my side..
You came to assist...but suddenly she was there
The sigh of pain that crossed our fate was in your eyes

Why fate is cruel, my love, that we may never meet?
I've walked this way in loneliness a thousand days
I know each pebble, stone, and crack upon your street
You stay imprisoned, like a wild bird in a cage





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for Iolanda's contest..."Untold Secrets"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/3/2010 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Iolanda's "Untold Secrets" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 5:54:00 PM
Oh, I love this, Carrie. Just wonderful, but ya know, you can't win EVERY single one top place. haha. Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/1/2010 7:17:00 PM
Im sos happy to share 3rd with you..although I think yours is better. BG
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:34:00 PM
Very interesting take on this picture and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:01:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your 3rd place win wth this lovely Quatrain .. a perfect flow of the photo... enjoy your very special win.. luv..from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/30/2010 4:38:00 PM
LOVE "the sigh of pain that crossed our fate" ... what a beautiful description that might encompass a whole life ... LOL ... well, maybe thats too much drama on my part ... smile ... good luck in the contest, Carrie!!
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Date: 4/30/2010 7:21:00 AM
Lost memories came back again when I read this fine poem of yours, Carrie! Wish you good luck in the contest and have a nice weekend! Thank you for all your friendliy comments! Vielen Dank dafür!...Love, Gert
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Date: 4/30/2010 12:15:00 AM
Like the enigma lying bhind this poem Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/28/2010 1:51:00 PM
Good luck with this fine verse, Carrie. You're the BEST! RAY
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:59:00 AM
majestic.
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:32:00 AM
Thx for your kind comment on my write, Carrie...always appreciated...Jimmy
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:20:00 AM
Nicely done Carrie. I love the man vs woman component of this contest.
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:13:00 AM
very deep. thank you for sharing. :) please look at some of my work. thank you
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