Solidified By a Poet's Dozen

"Solidified by a Poet's Dozen"

Since the fall of Love
You spring into thoughts often
Summer, I want you

Being named after the most desired season
Girl, that must truly be the reason

Why my rhyme has lost its way
Why my Love can not resist the mere mention of your name

So now I am rendered to nothing more than a slave
To a union that had to have been Deemed From Above
Because of all the sweet passion you gave
That was done simply in the name of Love
Truly, I can not think of any single thing better than that thereof....


11-1-15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 12:54 PM
You romantic, you! What a sweet poem Eric. Well done!! Best wishes, Keith
Chircop Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Beautiful poem !
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:24 PM
thank you Charmaine....I am so glad you liked it....;)
Shaw Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Eric, you have such a romantic soul, and display it well in this very lovely poem of devotion and love. Congratulations on your win! ~Kim
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:23 PM
thank you kim....and what can I say....I Love women....;)
B. Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 9:32 PM
Beautifully written!
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:21 PM
we have a pippi sighting....lol....but thank you so much my dear friend....;)
Elizab Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 6:56 PM
She must be some kind of girl to have such a beautiful poem written for her. Another beautiful one you have here, Eric.
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:20 PM
thank you Felicia....and it was just from the inspiration of the contest....I am the singlest man on Earth....lol
Muideen Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 11:57 PM
You penned this excellent and beautiful Eric. This was done with extreme passion, lovable and enjoyable. Congratulations on your wonderful win.............A.M.
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:18 PM
thanks am....all good writing must come from the heart....
Spagnola Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Awesome! Congrats :), jill
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:17 PM
thanks jill....this was awesome inspiration....;)
Merryman Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 3:07 PM
A nice romantic piece, Eric! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:16 PM
thanks kim....I am just a hopeless romantic I guess....lol
A  Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 3:17 PM
Hi Eric, Congratulations on your Poet's Dozen win. Love SKAT
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:15 PM
thanks skat....;)
Roper Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 1:30 PM
Eric, good write congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:13 PM
thank you eve....that's just how I feel Love should be....;)
Y. Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Eric, this is beautiful! Well done. Congratulations on your winning write it was deserved:-)Alexis 7
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:12 PM
thank you alexis....that means a lot to me....;)
Lindley Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 8:21 PM
Congrats on your win Eric!
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:10 PM
thanks Robert....
A  Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 11:48 AM
WOW, Beautiful. Love this side of you.... SKAT
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:08 PM
thanks skat....so are you saying you hate the other side(s)....lol
Lindley Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 9:31 PM
Very well crafted, great flow and a continuous message. Bravo! A7
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:07 PM
thank you Robert....everyone should know Love....
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