Solid Steel Blue

solid steel blue clouds cover a rising sun's light.. acorns play on roof

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 9:39:00 AM

Sara, I wonder is the Acorns, is the snack of the squirrel... Loving your haiku... Linda

James Fraser

Date: 11/4/2013 5:17:00 PM

Reading your lovely poem Sara I can hear them hitting the roof just like apples do on a tin roof. Nice one, James :)

Jack Horne

Date: 10/29/2013 4:45:00 PM

love that last line

Donna Jones

Date: 10/29/2013 9:56:00 AM

Sarah....smiling....the acorns are falling here too....this is such a beautiful poem...hope all is well..

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/29/2013 8:13:00 AM

What a delightful write my friend! I surely loved reading about this lovely poem here this morning! This is a fantastic piece Sara, a grandiose verse this is! I love the first line very descriptive! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2013 6:26:00 AM

- Fall melodies .... and color. - Well written in a haiku, Sara! - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)